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RANDOM YAOI SHORT STORY! #1
hehe hi everybody. i was just wandering if i could kick my story making up a notch so i did the hardest one. yaoi story telling. i thought that it would be a challenge. lets see how my imagination takes me.

INTRO
Long ago. two kingdoms ruled. each one controled a power.
kingdom of flames controled fire.
kingdom of waves controled water.
both kingdoms were both in peace until a traitor came and destroyed half of the waves kingdom. everyone thought it was the kingdom from flames but even they had doubts abt that accuzation. now to keep the peace both kings sons
waves:Leo
flames:Cazo
both too investigate on the matter.
now the story is to begin.


Leo heard this and did not like it at all.
He wanted to figure out who destroyed his kingdom
on his own but no one wanted to listen to him.
They insited that the prince of flames was to help him since he really wasnt that buff to begin with and only knew a handful of water spells and the way of the sword. True he was lanky and sort of weak but his survival smarts are second to none and he would rather die than actually be helped by the very country that they are doubting. But that was all. And besides that. he hardly even knew this Cazo. All he heard of him was that hes good-looking,strong and powerful. And very smart. He hated this. But there he was standing in the great hall waiting for this prince. As soon as he inhaled a breathe to ask where that b*****d was. He appeared out of no where. He came, appearently through the door behind him but he made no sound. They all were surprised. Leo looked frusturated.
"What?!"
Cazo tapped him on the shoulder, smiled and waved. Leo jumped. What he saw was Cazo's chest up and only from that did he feel his face warm up. His chest was very big and strong looking. It was covered with a red and gold cotton shirt with the flame emblem on it. His arms were big and muscular and had scars, probably from previous wars or from training. His face got hotter when he saw Cazo's face. He had a tan complextion and strong yet gentle red eyes. His hair was cropped short and had a erring on his left earlobe. A single scar went up from his left eye and drew all the way down to the bottom jaw. Leo took time to regain his posture.
"Where the hell did u come from?"
Cazo just looked at him.
"Um..the door. what did u think i did levatate myself in here?"
Leo wanted to punch him. He didnt care if he was another prince, or a strong one for that matter. No one talked to him like that. Cazo went around him and bowed to his mother and father, queen and king, and told them in a proud voice
"Im Cazo Tsubasa. Im here for the mission." And thats what Leo hated even more. His voice sounded warm and milky. He hated this man already. His father, King Tira, told them about the mission.
"You both are to find the person that destroyed half of the kingdom. Someone like him must have lots of power and someone not to be trifelled with. All you have to do is him and if u can take him into custody and bring him back here. Alive or dead. Is that understood?"
Leo and Cazo both nodded their heads. Tira nodded his head.
"We are counting u both to find him. Both of you. Good Luck."
They both bowed and then left the great hall. Cazo looked at Leo and he to him. Leo didnt like it.
"What?"
Cazo just shrugged and said
"I was just wondering if you are strong in anything. Like magic or sword fighting..or hand-to-hand combat."
Leo didnt feel that comfertable talking about it. He wasnt as good-looking as Cazo...hell he wasnt even as strong but he might as well tell him since they were partners now.
"Im not that bad. Im more of a spell weaver than anything. hand-to-hand and sword fighting has never been my forte."
Cazo nodded.
"Okay just wanted to know."
They walked on in silence. When they got to the staircases Cazo stopped irruptedly and put out a full blast attack on Leo. Leo saw it and doged out of the way. At the same time he shot a powerful water-ice attack that hit Cazo from the shoulders down. Cazo was now frozen with only his head outside so he could still breathe. Leo was surprised at the onslaught. "So what was that all about?"
Cazo smirked at Leo and he felt that he was melting.."God stop thinking like that! Hes a guy not a girl! Hes not hot!"..
but he couldnt help thinking that. With a blink of an eye he was free from the ice tomb.
"'Not that bad'? Please more like great. I was just seeing how well u can move to a surprise attack."
Leo was pissed.
"Well good job. Ur fire attack blew out the window and half of the wall. Like we didnt have enough damage already!"
Leo wanted to make that bastards smirking head to ice up and not be able to breathe but that would be completly stupid to do it. But he wanted to so badly. He walked down the start case. He looked back.
"If ur not gonna take this seriously u can go back to ur kingdom. Ill do this on my own if u like."
The next thing he knew he was leaning away from Cazo becuz he was leaning toward him. Somehow he got from the top of the stairs to the middle where Leo was. He was trying not to get to close but that was impossible with Cazo's body right up against his, his arms on the sides of the railing so Leo couldnt get away. He whispered.
"o im serious alright. Thats why i did that. To see how good u really are. I dont want some weak guy from the waves to keep me down. And besides,"
He leaned in closer.
"How can i do this without my help of a pretty, strong assitant like urself? I feel honored." He smirked again and stood upright. Leo was blushing furiously. And he wished he could just kill this guy on the spot. "U didnt have to lean on me!" He started to walk down the stairs again but Cazo beat him to it and was at the bottom. "U really need to start working on transprotation spells." He looked at him then gasped. "Wait a minute! thats how u got into the room! U transported!" Cazo looked at him. "Finally u noticed."
Leo went up pushed him. "Transporting into the castle is forbidden. How could u do that without any guilt!" Cazo just shruged. "Maybe becuz i really didnt know and just did it out of reflex." Leo just brushed him aside. "Whatever. If we dont leave soon we will never catch up with that guy! And arguing isnt gonna make him come back." Cazo caught up with him easily. "Fine by me. So how are we gonna get him?" Leo sighed. Thankfully he was being serious for once. "Apparently he took of into the woods." Cazo nodded his head. "Good at least we have a lead. So we walking or riding?" Leo looked at the woods. The place was called Shallow Grave Forest. Everyone that went in there ended up dead and never seen again. Leoo didnt want to waste his beautiful stallions in there so he decieded. "We walk. We'll bring the things that we need. And only those things." Then he looked at Cazo, smirked and said sarcasticely. "Or do u know how to make a bag bigger on the inside?" Cazo was shocked. "Did u just joke around? Oh my lord u did!" He hugged Leo with the strength of a mountain bear. "Im so proud of u!" Leo felt warm against the mans chest so instead of pushing back he said "So does that mean u dont know a spell?" Cazo let go of him and got out two bags off of his horse. "So which one do u want and ill do the rest." Leo smiled. "Good now were getting somewhere. When he went to get a bag Cazo grabbed his arm and pulled. He whispered into Leo's ear. "What do u mean we're getting somewhere hmm?" Leo pulled away and got the bag. 'I mean that we are finally getting somewhere to actually get the person that really did this." He swept his hand over to the half that was burnt and destroyed. Leo grimanced at this sight. When he fnds that b*****d that did this he promised himself that he would kill him. He would too. With all his power. Cazo put his hand on his shoulder. "Hey snap out of it. Im gonna leave u if u dont move that tight a** of urs." Leo turned around and saw him already leaving. He screamed. "WHAT DO U MEAN TIGHT a**?" He looked down, then screamed at Cazo again while running up to him again. "ITS BETTER THAN BEING ASSLESS!" Cazo smirked and turned around. "Do u really think that? That i have no a**?"
"No. Not that i would look." stare "Besides why did u look?"
Cazo started to laugh. "So u do agree u got a tight a**?" Leo blushed and started to hit him pointlessly. "I didnt say that! U have got to have the dirtiest mind i know!" Cazo just smiled. "And u love me for it." Leo just groaned. "This is gonna be a long mission."
Soon they were in the forest. They were mostly walking in silence but Leo broke the silence. "Hey Cazo." Cazo stopped. "What?" Leo looked around. "I know that we just got in here. But i feel like were being were being watched." Cazo nodded i felt the samething from the begining. I think he or she, has their own cronies following us. The wimps." Right after he said that water and fire attacks came out off no where and headed straight for them. Cazo dogged but Leo stood there surprised. His legs looked paralyzed. Cazo snorted in impatience and got him out of there. He wrapped his arm around his waist and pulled him out while throwing out his own attacks. He landed put Leo on across his shoulder and ran. He was dogging attacks until he decided to transport himself 500 yards away from where he was running too. When he appeared again he was surrounded by the same guys again. This time they had their arms rasied and were ready to attack if they tried to get away. Cazo snorted. "Great."


[to be continued]






User Comments: [1]
B_BChi022
Community Member





Fri Feb 01, 2008 @ 06:36pm


Hmm..

It is good and well thought out story wise, but where you haven't got any spaces between the lines, it makes it very hard to read.

I'm not sure what to say about the characters at this point in time, though you almost have the whole 'Seme-Uke' thing down alright. Or 'Playful-Serious', which ever way you look at it.

Cazo can be flirtaous openly where as Leo is more closed off, and is generally hating his company.


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