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when all goes down and seems to fall, just smile and endure it ^^
Surrender
I let my tears flow in surrender,
As these feelings I had hinder,
Nothing you can say can change it,
Not even just the littlest bit,
You've used me,
Abused me,
You've made me cry,
Especially when I thought I could fly,
Now I'm ready to surrender,
As my feelings all do hinder,
My sadness just takes me over,
I thought that you could be my lover,
The memories I had flow through my mind,
I had always thought you were kind,
I sigh in my sudden sadness,
And I surrender, giving you my bliss.


Only took a minute to write...






User Comments: [2]
Sir Tyous
Community Member





Tue Oct 09, 2007 @ 04:10am


wow you really should write poetry for a living it is really good.


Tearstains
Community Member





Tue Oct 09, 2007 @ 04:13am


You really think so? I think this poem sucks >_< That's just cuz' I've written better?


User Comments: [2]
 
 
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