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Red the Vampire
Red The Vampire. ((Cont.))
Seeing them all run away he just smiles to himself. "Well looks like i better hurry it up." He runs thruo the halls till he sees a man. He has his back to Red and he is standing guard. Red quickly comes up behind him and reaches around grabing his chin and turning it. A load crack sounded through the hall and the man fell to the ground. Red shook from a cold chill as he looked at the body. "Somtimes i scare myself." He walked quitly to a door that was really big. He smiled to himself and opened up. Looking inside he took a step in. He had just walked into the man he was hunting after's harem. Half naked ladys where all around doing things that would make any man feel good. Red thought to himself. Jack pot. They looked at him with pleasure in there eyes. The all crawded around him. there hands touching him. There bodys rubing up against him till finally Red started feeling vary light. He looked around and saw that he was now striped of his wepons. The ladys eyes turned red and the all looked at him with one thing on there mine and it was not what he had in the first place. "Warm Blood."






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Mismatched_Dreams
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commentCommented on: Wed Aug 29, 2007 @ 08:42pm
Ouch. We girls can be sooo tricky. ninja


commentCommented on: Wed Aug 29, 2007 @ 09:06pm
Wow Its Really Good. You Should Maybe Become A Writer Oneday. You're Really Good. It Would Be Really Cool If You Brought In A Female Character But Its Up To You.



-AngelxWhisper-
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DragonofHeaven
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commentCommented on: Wed Sep 05, 2007 @ 05:23pm
There is only one word to describe this.. Wonderful. And even that word doesn't do it justice. You do plan to write more, yes? I wonder what those tempting and dangerous vixens will do..


commentCommented on: Thu Nov 22, 2007 @ 02:35am
nice...but a little scary.



TheQuietDisaster
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Fireearth neko
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commentCommented on: Sun Nov 25, 2007 @ 08:05pm
Very good. You just have a few spelling errors but the way you explain things and keep the plot moving is very good.


I'm tired of you telling me what to do. I am tired of you pushing me down. I am tired of being called useless. I am tired of believing you. I am who I am and you can't change that.
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