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Red the Vampire
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Red's sword meets his brothers with a blind furry. His brother just laughs and then pushs him back. "You where never as strong as i was. What makes you think you can be any stronger now?" Red grits his teeth as he comes in with anougher blow this time it hits cutting into his brothers shirt but missing his flesh. "Stop talking and FIGHT!" Drake's face whent from playing to a mad look. His sword moves into attack pose and ready to strike Red down. They both go running toward each other and in a flash and the sound of metal hitting flesh blood falls onto the ground.






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TheQuietDisaster
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commentCommented on: Thu Apr 10, 2008 @ 12:37am
oh my gwee
that is soo good
i hope more people comment so you can write more!!
>.<


commentCommented on: Thu Apr 10, 2008 @ 01:05am
wow i love it!!
plez write more!!



Red The Vampie Is Awesome
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xXSunny-RainXx
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commentCommented on: Thu Apr 10, 2008 @ 01:10am
nice
it very good
it could be a book some day...if you fixed the spelling
lolz


commentCommented on: Thu Apr 10, 2008 @ 10:32am
O.O Wow! I bet you it was Red huh? I'd laugh if it was, but anyway, it was really good! More please! These are very addicting ^^



-AngelxWhisper-
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akogara
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commentCommented on: Thu Apr 10, 2008 @ 12:24pm
wow that is good you know what check my jornal Im soon gonna add another story about Akogara and her demon smile I hope you like the one where she was first in the labn than ecaped


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