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Red the Vampire
Amber the Human!!
Amber jumped up from the ground and wraped her arms around Red's neck. She pushed her soft lips against his as he wraped his arms around her waist. Red softly wispered into her ear after the kiss was over. "I love you Amber." Amber smiled and playfully nibbled on his ear lob and then softly said. "I love you more." Red shut his eyes because he loved it when she nibbled on his ears. He finally pulled away and she looked at him with a evil smile. "I have a suprise for you." Said Red. "My brother Drake is coming to vist use tonight." Amber layed her head against his chest and said. "Im glad i get to finally meet some of your family." Red kissed her forhead and then heard a knock on the door. "That must be him." Red ran for the door jumping down steps for his room was up stairs. Finally getting to the front door he opened it to see his brother standing there looking him straight in the eyes. "Good evening brother." Said Drake. "Same to you." Answered Red. They did not shake hands or hug they where not that type of brothers. "So where is this woman of yours? I hope she is as pretty as my last one." Drake let out a soft laugh as he looked around and finally spotted Amber. Drakes face was no longer full of kindness but now of disgust. He turned to Red and looked him in the eye. "She is a human."






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wrath1618
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commentCommented on: Wed Jun 04, 2008 @ 09:27pm
what?! so shes ugly cuz shes person?! burning_eyes
dude. thats dum.


commentCommented on: Wed Jun 04, 2008 @ 10:27pm
hey look another cmt. =]



wrath1618
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wrath1618
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commentCommented on: Wed Jun 04, 2008 @ 10:29pm
nd this makes 3 so get busy xd


commentCommented on: Sun Jun 08, 2008 @ 11:04pm
...wow



TheQuietDisaster
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TheQuietDisaster
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commentCommented on: Sun Jun 08, 2008 @ 11:19pm
oh my god!!
wow
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wow
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that was suposed to be my siggy
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commentCommented on: Mon Jun 16, 2008 @ 04:34am
OH MY GAWD!!!
i just read the whole thing and i hope you get published for this!!
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xXQueen-ThingyXx
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wrath1618
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commentCommented on: Wed Jun 25, 2008 @ 09:37am
come on hooker!!!!!
you have like 7 cmts bye 3 differnt ppl...
so make more story now. xd


commentCommented on: Fri Jun 27, 2008 @ 07:48am
this is the only part I read but it is good ^_^



karihidori
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Magnolia Noir
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commentCommented on: Wed Aug 13, 2008 @ 11:33pm
Its really good. But in the end you said, "Drakes face was no longer full of kindness but now of discust." But "discust" is spelt 'disgust'. I like the story though!


commentCommented on: Sun Aug 24, 2008 @ 03:29am
are you ever gonna tell us how drake kills her??
>.<



TheQuietDisaster
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Princess Keona
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commentCommented on: Sun Oct 12, 2008 @ 07:45pm
good confused


commentCommented on: Fri Nov 07, 2008 @ 02:01pm
very brilliant...-crosses one leg over the other and reads on- so is this some sort of ongoing story? or is this you?



iPoptart Almighty
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Demonic_Fox6548
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commentCommented on: Tue Nov 18, 2008 @ 02:35am
Wow this is Awsome i can't wait until the next post


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