This is for book 2 of the series I am trying to write. Personally, I think it is a lot better then the first book, because I gave myself a lot more plotting time. I hope you like it. (I really like it) Still I want to get the plot holes fixed before I start writing.
Characters
Kishi: (Protagonist)
A couple months ago, Kishi found out that she was a vampire. She had to flee her school and is now coming to another school. Because of some of the events at her old school, Kishi has lost a lot of confidence. She wants her new classmates to accept her but she feels as though she is a freak that deserves to be alone.
Moe:
In charge of protecting Kishi, and teaching Kishi the ways of a vampire. Moe is one of Kishi real friends.
Allan:
Also in charge of protecting Kishi. Allan is also a newborn vampire...but he became a vampire by choose. At this time, he knows almost nothing about his life as a human.
Keiko: (2nd Protagonist)
Went to Kishi old school. Revealed her secret. Forced her to flee. Kishi really resents Keiko for that, even though she knows Keiko just wanted to protect the people at her school. Meanwhile, while Kishi is starting her new school, Keiko is undergoing severe stress and depression.
Atari:
Vampire Slayer. One of the ones that tried to kill Kishi. Recently, he got dumped by his girlfriend and is all over Keiko. Atari parents were killed by vampires.
Darren:
Also a Vampire Slayer. Has feelings for Keiko (His her ex-bf). Kishi almost killed him by sucking out all of his blood. He hates vampire too. His dad is a vampire. His sister was recently killed by vampires.
Maya:
Darrens sister. Used to be Kishi friend. Dies.
Francesca:
Girl that tries to befriend Kishi. She is one of the cool kids. She hates Allan and Moe.
Plot
*Note This story is told from two different perspectives. Keiko and Kishi.
**Also Note This outline is pretty vague
Part 1- Kishi's point of view
-Kishi goes to new school
-Kishi meets + befriends Allan
-Kishi befriends a girl named Francesca
-The in-crowd hates Allan, wants Kishi to ditch Allan for them
Part 1-Keiko's point of view
-Keiko finds out that Kishi is still alive
-Atari and Darren ask her to be a slayer. At first she rejects but then after a while she accepts
-When Maya dies, Keiko tries to confort Darren.
-Keiko gets into a fight with her mom and decides to run away with Darren and Atari
-Keiko goes vampire hunting with Atari both of them get bitten
-Atari tries to kill himself but then he fails.
-Keiko almost dies during the transformation but then she is saved by Allan and brought back to his dorm
Part 2- Keiko+Kishi (Sorry if this is a little bit confusing...)
-Keiko tells Allan and Moe to look for Atari, failing to mension he is a vampire slayer
-Atari is saved just in time
-Keiko falls in love with Allan
-Kishi gets very pissed of at Allan and Moe and decides to hang out with Francesca instead
-Then Kishi makes up with Allan and Moe, when Francesca gets mad at her Kishi tells Francesca off, Kishi also relizes that the in-crowd is just a bunch of losers.
-After the fight Francesca and Kishi are still friends
-Francesca leads Kishi into the woods, where the bad vampires are.
-To escape Kishi tries to run back to her school grounds
-The bad vampire try to kill Kishi but Allan saves her, but not without trashing the gym and beating the s**t out of Francesca (Fights are messy)
-Allan is expelled. Kishi is suspended for about a month
-(Gah this part is hard to explain...) The word gets spread around about Allan. The vampire slayers suspect he may be a vampire (Little do they know Atari is a vampire) and since Atari has been near that location supposidly "investigating" the Vampire Slayers suspect he knows something. If Atari tells the Vampire Slayers he knows absolutly nothing, that would increase there chances of finding out Atari is a vampire. So to avoid that Atari must either A. Choosing to save his own skin by telling the vampire slayers Allan is a vampire (which would mean Kishi and Moe would get caught too, since both Kishi and Moe are stored in the database as "Wanted Vampires" wink or B. Not saying anything and getting intergatted by the Vampire Slayers. Atari is a terrible liar and doesn't do very good when under extreme pressure. So if they choose to intergate him...he is toast.
-So to save his own selfish little a**, he tells the Vampire Slayers that Allan is a vampire.
-Atari tells Keiko what he did. She gets pissed and tells Allan.
-But it is already to late. The vampire slayers are after them, and they have no way to escape from them. So they argue for about an hour, trying to figure out if their is a way to escape. When Kishi tries to step in and stop the arguement everyone yells at her and causes her to cry
-Keiko, who the vampire slayers aren't even after, tries to stay with Allan. Right before Kishi gets caught, Keiko confronts Kishi about her problems and her stress.
-In the end Keiko's influence over Darren ends up temporarly saving Kishi's+Allan's+Moe's life
A Madness Shared by Two Community Member 
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