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Ruizu's Journal!! YAY!!
umm..I'll put like whatever in here. So yeah feel free to read!!`
Without You, I am Free

When you're gone
I can't get you off my mind
This anxiety overcomes me
Do you feel all the emptiness inside?

Concerned for no one but myself
Only fearing the future
Without you here, I feel so free now
Waiting for the heavens to descend

Cry, I do not
Nor is your presence missed
Worried about those around me
So many different thoughts and opinions

To try not to care
Is easier said than done
But in this room
Not a soul cares about this predicament

In the end, I am lost
Carried away by the sea
Only to be washed upon the shore
Not the slightest bit desolate, or lonely






User Comments: [1]
MissSpiderMonkey
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Wed Feb 25, 2009 @ 03:45am


Good Taylor. My favorite line was "carried away by the sea." I like that

but to be honest, i like your last one more. because it had more emotion in it.

This was was less open, but you did good on the lines and all.

=D


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