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The Vampire's Flame: A Bloody Romance~
Chapter 1: The hunter appears

"I guess I can do the job...." His voice was even, and held an soft but smooth sound to it. His hair was as black as the night sky and came down below his neck. "Alright then, I'll take care of the problem when i get there in 3 days. Thank you for the business sir." He hung up quickly and rose up from the chair in his small hotel room. You could never guess it was a hotel based on its destroyed walls and vomit colored floor. The scent matched the scene all to well. His black shirt hung down midway to his knees, his tan colored jeans and black steel-tip boots making thuds as he walked toward the exit. Flame Hunter, is what most call him, The one who always wins and leaves a trail of fire in his dust. He'd get calls from all over the world and some how manage to get there just in the nick of time. But for the few who have actually known him outside of his work, He's simply Kudo, the kindest gentlemen, but the biggest perv, the cleanest fighter, but the cruelest killer. As he roamed the dark streets of this nameless town, his mission echoed in his head. " In the heart of the Huji Forest, there's a city hidden in the tall oaks, a very important place for it supply's some of the worlds greatest weapons.... There have been too many reports of missing workers, and trails of blood leading to a drained corpse. A vampire has been doing these things...... and the weapons department is slowly falling due to the fear that drives the citizens away.... Get rid of the problem, and claim your reward of 5mil. " Kudo He rubbed the edge of the back of his neck gently, the scar of a bite was quickly hidden by his hair as his hand wen into his pocket. He then looked back to the run down building of a hotel and smiled. "Last time I'm staying in a crap hole like that." He snickered as he continued along the path to his mission. Little did he know of what would happen to Him now.... What lies ahead of him is more then just a vampire..... Much more....

To be continued~






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-Safiria_Blood_Flower-
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commentCommented on: Mon Oct 27, 2008 @ 12:14am
AHHHHHH!! -squeal.- I LURVVVVVVVVEEEESSSSSSSSSS ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT! -huggles.- Nicely written o-o ^-^


commentCommented on: Mon Oct 27, 2008 @ 03:03am
Go vampires!!! And any story with Kudo in it is bound to be good!
You use great descriptive language! Its really well done! My stories are never really decriptive enough... I am writing a full length novel, I am up to chapter seven of 22



white-fang-demon
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Jia_Daiyu
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commentCommented on: Thu Mar 25, 2010 @ 04:40pm
I guess I'm a little late to comment. -points to posting date-

But either way I loves it very much! this man sounds familiar. ^_^


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