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some poems, stories and writings (adding more soon)

i would like for everyone to comment at least once.

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i hate I hate the way you treated me I hate what you did to me When you laughed at what I asked When you weren't there when I passed I loved you more than anything I loved that you thought the same thing You made me feel like I was in heaven You now have me seeking a safe haven

Posted by: Coleikins Mon Jul 02, 2007 @ 09:33pm

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diskSPACE
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Commented on: Wed Jul 04, 2007 @ 03:06pm


	I think it's great how you can say so many things in two lines at a time. The way you write reminds me of... well.... how I write lol. Check out my journal too xD

Commented on: Wed Jul 04, 2007 @ 03:48pm


	Very descriptive, slightly dark as well

Hikari Tsukiko Yami
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Namina_Cookie
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Commented on: Wed Jul 04, 2007 @ 03:49pm


	Wow thats a great poem you do very well!! I give them two thumbs up!! Keep doing a awesome job!!

Commented on: Wed Jul 04, 2007 @ 04:00pm


	Short and strong.

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Kiroko Oroki
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Commented on: Wed Jul 04, 2007 @ 07:57pm


	very intense I like it ^^

Commented on: Thu Jul 05, 2007 @ 07:50pm


	Love it.. Go look in my journal.

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Raya Lu
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Commented on: Tue Dec 04, 2007 @ 10:44pm


	It's really good. There is so much emotion in it and you can put so much detail into such a short poem.

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