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this is just for random stories i make.
"hey kilin wait up dude" a man yelled, while running to him.
"what" Kilin said turning around.
"we still have to moniter the subject for-"
"Shut up you fool!! We'll talk about this when were at our hide out...we cant talk about this around these humans. i still cant beleave the godess thinks the synthyoptis hero is here." Kilin said in a discusted manor.
"sir are you saying you wont do what she sais?" the man said.
Kilin's eyes widened. "no i would never difiy her...I just don't understand why she said here ther-"
"Are you questioning her ladyships orders cernal?" a man said standing behind him.
Kilin jumped "No sir!!" he said quickly, turning around and seeing all the medals and stripes on the mans jacket.
"Cernal Kilin, she chose this place because of the immortal souls these people posess inside them...there bodies die but there souls continue on and find another one to 'live' in. there perfict for what we need."the man explaned.
"but i thought we were looking for a 16 year old boy."Kilin said confused
"Yes we are cernal...but i just told you why she choses humans insted of a Hirin pixie, of an Elf. now please cernal kilin, and privet Dillan, we must get back and report you're findings...I'm quite shore you have something."
"i do sir" They walked to an inn and opened the door. when they steped in the place was quiet and dim, the air was filled with perfume and incence. Tables were every where and in strait rows. A woman sat in a chair on a stage.
"Did you find him?"she said in a very soothing voice.
kilin bowed. "Yes you're ladyship."
"Where is he?" she said looking around them expecting him to be there.
"We tried to kidnap him but he fought back, and he knock out Rein" The woman's eyes opened wide "I wish you luck on getting both of them back...and please take lutenet Deiz with you."she said looking a bit grim."Also...what is his name?"
"its Allen kuzuku."


This was the first part of the story...i hope you like it so far...next part coming soon.





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    paige_1_shosho
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    commentCommented on: Tue Sep 25, 2007 @ 07:23pm
    good story ..... wink


    commentCommented on: Tue Dec 04, 2007 @ 10:24pm
    ilike it, but cernal is actually spelled colonal......in the term that ur trying to use it as at least.



    yuki~chan3
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    commentCommented on: Thu Jun 19, 2008 @ 01:18am
    Good... but the spelling and grammer needs some work. biggrin


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