It's been a while since i posted in here, because I've been working on a new stories...well alot of them but they just weren't good enough so here's one i wrote yesterday because i was bored but don't forget to comment on what you like and didn't like okay xd
The waves came crashing down on me one by one dragging me deeper into the water's hidden depths below the sea."This is the end." With that thought reality sunk in. I started to cry, but no one could tell for my tears mingled with the salty water's of my captor. My heart and hopes fell as I did, My life flew before my eyes and was gone in an instant considering i was only 19. 19. So young and unexperienced with the world i would never get to see. I looked up hoping to see the moon one last time, but unfortunatly the clouds hid it from my view. The water started growing colder and my body grew numb. I tried to reach for the surface, to be released from a watery grave. My attempts were worthless for it only made me sink quicker. One last look, I pleaded...one more time i prayed. Slowly, I lifted my head for my body was growing weaker by the minute. When I finally got my head up I saw the moon. The clouds were gone and it shone in all its brilliance. A smile crept across my face despite my situation. I stared at the moon for awhile. It seemed to creep closer and closer towards me. Then the moon changed slightly into a face of a boy. His features were flawles and took my breath away. As I watched the tiny air bubbles float up to the freedom of the surface. The moon, that now was a boy; kept coming closer. "Beautiful," I mouthed, and the last thin k I remember is a stone cold grasp around my waist pulling me upward.
 CA-CHINGY · Sat May 05, 2007 @ 12:18am · 4 Comments |
