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Ranai Shadow Dancer
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drifting on a gentle sea the moon has disapeared
a silent mountain climbs up high but that those do not see.

A gentle giant grinds on down an iceburg on the sea
The gentle ocean holds a ghost, a ship, a giant key

lying like a wounded child on the bottom of the sea
a ghost, a ship, a key under the sea forever
Titanic.................

A bloody paint reminder forever marks the slain

A red stain on an ice burg it brings back so much pain

A silent death reminder...............a death apon the sea

Titanic poem by Rain


please comment on my poem and put it on my profile!!!! thanks!!!
Oh....dont ask why i wrote this i just did ok??!!





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Covenant_Sin
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comment Commented on: Sat May 05, 2007 @ 09:28pm
wow.....nice poem.... whee


comment Commented on: Sat Jun 02, 2007 @ 08:26pm
nice



darkness1222
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Ranai Shadow Dancer
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comment Commented on: Tue Aug 28, 2007 @ 11:56pm
Hey pple please comment on my story too!!!! please!!!! and thanks for commenting darkness and sin!!!! xd


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