( okay this is the the story if your reading this part then your ahead D< go back to the first entry i use quotes to explain things second leave a comment on wat you liked an disliked > surprised i dont have a name for some of the characters post one and u mit have it in the story and no weird names D< wink
as i stared at aiko in wonder ment i didnt hear her words her lips move but my ears went deaf as gawked at her. when my other sense beside sight came back it was do to the warm touch from her she asked "ha are you listening to me the owner is in his pent house. she contoued with and elegant voice that indulged me that i almost forgot why i came. she soon escorted me to a room and said you can stay here until i come back. as i waited everything came back to me why i came where my enemy was and all i needed to do was go to the pent house and beat the s**t out of him...
2 be continued
(remember submit the names and such AND NO WEIRD NAMES ty)
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surprised manga idea's plz dont steal them that would be a douche thing to do
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I like the story....it seems like something I would roleplay.
My only prob is the grammar and such. xd
I had to read it outloud to get some of it.
Oh some names I like:
Mai
Natsuki
Aya
Yuna