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The Deltonian Chronicles

Posted by: Lokumun Thu Feb 23, 2006 @ 09:26pm

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Commented on: Thu Feb 23, 2006 @ 09:28pm


	This one is a short one. Tell me if there are any typos. By the way, I changed the end of the last one a bit.

Commented on: Thu Feb 23, 2006 @ 09:47pm


	there is one spellin error but im not tellin you yay

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Zithias
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Commented on: Fri Feb 24, 2006 @ 12:33am


	There is one spelling error when lokumun talks about the blade lash says "what do we do know" when it should say "what do we do now?" great story

Commented on: Mon Feb 27, 2006 @ 09:09pm


	Thanks Zithias. i fixed it. Now the story is perfect. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA twisted

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