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Comment. Don't comment. Obviously you're reading, so just keep on doing what you're doing.
Somebody needs to care...
I care for you, breathe for you
You say it's fine,
But those words I decline.
I want to be there,
You want to be here,
We share the same feelings, emotions.

You say don't worry about you,
Then you shouldn't worry about me,
We're two halves to a whole,
Without one, we are incomplete,

I need you,
You need me,
We need each other,
I care about you,
You care about me,
We care about each other,
But why can't they see?
Why don't they see what's hurting me, what's hurting us?

You are the best gift God has given me,
and I am thankful just for that,
Why can't she be thankful to even have you?
So what if you're not a girl,
Can't she see the greatness in you?
Can't she wait to have a daughter-in-law?
That will be her daughter,
A man was not meant to play a woman's role,
God was gracious enough to give you life,
but she is ghastly to not accept you for who you are

I love you,
I need you,
I care about you,
Even if you tell me "No"
I will not stop,
I will just go.


~MAV **original**






User Comments: [1]
xX Bitter-Sweet Karma Xx
Community Member





Sat Dec 25, 2010 @ 01:42am


So interesting to see my feelings come out this way and not remember...no wonder so many people have viewed this one. My poetic devices are slightly obscure, but not bad.


User Comments: [1]
 
 
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