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Cats Gone Wrong
Chapter One:
Cute Doesn't Cut It

I was on my way to my house when i passed a group of street cats. I stop to pet the orange tabby but when I bent down to pet it nothing was there.” Where did they go.” As I turned my head and saw a flash of orange fur. I started chasing it down the street and ran past nothing even though how far I walked. I gave up on chasing the cat as I saw them run into a alleyway. I got up and said” That was odd.""Usually all animals love me and let me pet them." I turned around and saw Daymond as he came out of the alleyway the cats came from. "Hi Lin how did you get to this side of town.” As he turned to a sign that said the town was Poncoa. I started getting embarrassed because I lived on the other side of town in Saikata."I...I wanted to go to the great shops here." I made up quickly so I didn't seem like a total klutz in front of him.
he nodded “But there are only food markets."
I felt more embarrassed than I would if I just said I got lost. I felt so stupid. he offered a ride home on his bike. I refused and ran. I ran until I could run no more. I finally reached my house and I was beat. I collapsed and I fell into a deep sleep then a minute later I heard a honk of a horn and truck was going full speed toward me. I cried out “Help". I closed my eyes and I opened them again thinking that I would feel lots of pain. but I felt like I didn't have a scratch on me. I opened my eyes to see I was in a soft patch of grass in my front yard and a orange tabby laying next to me. It was as tired as me. Then I suddenly remembered the cat from earlier. Was this that same cat? If it was did it save me? I reached my hand to pet it and it got up on its feet and jumped on top of my house. This was no ordinary cat and this time cute doesn't cut it. This cat was to fast, to strong , to acrobatic. It was unbelievable. I didn’t understand. How could this small thin cat carry someone as big as me. I stared in amazement at how unearthly this cat was.
Then all a sudden the cat turned its head and gave me a icy look that could make the hottest flame burn out . Then I realized who this cat reminded me of. Daymond…………

This is my first mini-manuscript every and it was fun and not hard at all except I capitalized every word at first. Somebody told me I was also writing the first few lines from my point of view and told me to correct it.

I'm sorry i had to redo this because i asked someone to read it and they showed me that i messed up even more so here is my redo sheet.

Sorry for the inconveince , eriagal ^__^'



Thank You ,eriagal