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Episode 9.

Scene 1: Mel is sitting on her bed. She has guns all around her. She picks up a Desert eagle and begins to polish it softly. she stops to inhale the smoke from her cigarette. then she continues to polish the gun. She puts down the towel and cocks the gun. it makes a loud noise. She stands up and puts the Pistol in the holster on her back. She gets up off her bed and walks towards her closet. she looks through the hung up clothes and finds a black jacket. she puts the jacket on over her tank top and walks back to her bed. she then picks up a M16 assault rifle and checks it's clip. after she sees that it's fully loaded, she puts the rifle under her bed. Her bed room door opens and mel quickly pulls out her pistol and points it towards the door. Dizz walks in with his hands up and smiles. mel sighs and drops the gun on her bed.


Dizz: Getting a little jumpy are we?


*Mel inhales the smoke from her cigarette and knocks off the ashes to the floor*


Mel: You can't be doing that dizz, you almost lost your head.


Dizz: I'm pretty sure you wouldn't squeeze the trigger anyways * grins*


Mel: mhmm * puts out cigarette* so, what is it?


Dizz: o nothing really, just wanted to know where you and blade are going later.


Mel: O we just going target practicing. *picks up gun* i gotta get my aim better.


*Dizz gets on his knees next to mel*


Dizz: Can i go! Please!!



Mel: Nope, you gotta clean up the place today *laughs*


Dizz; Mel what the hell, today is mannie's clean up day!



Mel: Well your fan shot him, remember? so he can't do anything for a while.




Dizz: O yea * gets a straight face*



Mel: well, imma go get blade and leave *stands up* Can you do a favor for me honey and carry my guns to the car? thanks *leaves the room*

*Dizz stands up and watches mel leave the room. he picks up the guns on the bed and carries them out the room. When he gets in the hallway he sees blade. Blade starts to laugh*

Blade: She has you carrying her stuff huh? *Laugh*


Dizz; Shut up. i have guns in my hand and i'm not afraid to use them on brats like you. *points a gun at blade. then laughs*


Scene 2: Mel is driving a truck through a forest. Blade is curious about where they are headed. he is looking around and sees somthing jumping on the tree tops. Blade ignores it. and looks at mel.


Blade: so, you know smoking is bad..


*mel keeps her head facing on the road and stares at blade with the corner of her eyes. Blade closes his mouth and turns his head back facing the dirt road ahead of them*




Scene 3: The pull up to a target range. Mel hops out the truck and gets 2 rifles out from the back of the jeep. she throws blade one and walks towards the targets.*

Mel: come on boy we gotta get you shooting like a pro


*Mel Aims at the targets and gets a bullseye for each one. new targets pop up*


Mel: Your turn

*Blade holds the gun up and aims a the targets*


Mel: Your holding it wrong. * walks up to blade and lifts his arm higher* Higher your arms like this. now close one eye and aim.


*Blade aims the gun. Suddenly, before he fires, the gun gets shot out his hand. blade holds his hand and looks up. Mel quickly reloads the rifle. she looks around the trees for the person who shot. She sees a figure and shoots at it. but it quickly moves again. she tells blade to get in the jeep and lock the doors. instead, he goes to the jeep and gets his sword, then runs back to Mel's side.*


Mel: I told you to get in the truck!


Blade: No mel, i'm fighting *pulls out sword.*



*Mel stares at Blade, then the figure jumps from the trees and appears in front of Mel and blade*

Mel biggrin izz?


*The figure pulls out his sword and strikes blade. blade blocks the attack with his weapon. The figure and blade are fighting. Mel doesn't interfere cause she wants to see if blade can handle it. Blade and the Cloned Dizz strike each other with quick blows. Blade tries to keep up but the clone is going to fast for him. the clone give blade one blow that tears his shoulder. blade drops his sword and mel runs into the battle. the clone speaks*

Clone: Hehe it's seems that your friend here can't keep up with me.


Mel: Who the hell are you? *points pistol at its face*

Clone: i am Rizz. i'm on a mission by GPD to kill all killfam members

Mel: Well good luck *Fires*

* Rizz moves out of the way of the bullet and kicks the gun out of Mels hand. Mel Pulls out her sword. she waits for Rizz to attack. When he charges at her she simply moves out of his away. Rizz turns around to find that Mel is in Above him. She delevers a blow to Rizz's face. Rizz falls. Mel approaches Rizz, and suddenly he points a Pistol at mel and shoots her in the right shoulder. it doesn't penetrate her but it injures he arm. she quickly holds her wound and jumps back. Rizz gets up and cracks his neck. Mel lets go of her wound and grasps her sword tighly. Rizz laughs and wipes the blood off of his chin. They charge at each other and begin to sword fight once more. Mel isn't keeping up because of her injured arm. Rizz delivers a strike to Mels left leg that causes her to kneel. Rizz approaches and gets in a execution stance. He raises his sword, but before he could decapitate Mel, Blade Slices his hand off, and the sword drops. Rizz screams. he Jumps away into the forest. Blade gets down next to mel..


Blade: O my god Mel are you ok?



Mel: Yea only flesh wounds. * she tries to stand up but falls*


Blade: Stay still *stands up* imma call dizz.















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iCHARLlE
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 11, 2009 @ 01:45am
e picks up the guns on the beg an
i think you mean bed bro,


commentCommented on: Sat Jul 11, 2009 @ 02:50am
when is kam going to knock someone out?



KAM QUIT
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KF-Dizzy
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 11, 2009 @ 03:02am
Lmao


commentCommented on: Sat Jul 11, 2009 @ 03:43am
Bad a** fight scene bro, it reminds me of a videogame storyline.



Domiin
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