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This journal is gonna basicly be for my story called Fangs. Check it out.
Fangs: Chapter one: Hunger/Part Two
Fayt tried to hold back from his hunger for blood for as long as he could but every second was taking its toll on his resistance. He looked to the two that threatened to attack him and he said, smiling slightly
"Come and get me....." The blue fox frowned angrily and he gripped his knife. The fox said with a harsh tone "Gladly!" he ran at Fayt and he thrusted the knife at his chest. Fayt easily grabbed his wrist before the knife hit his chest and he twisted it while stepping behind the fox's back. He pulled on it to put more pressure on it's joint. The fox yelled in pain as Fayt pulled more. The cheetah ran at Fayt to help his parter but Fayt threw the fox into him. making them fall to the ground. The cheetah was much faster than the fox when he leaped at Fayt with his knife in his hand. He slashed down at Fayt's head when he started to fall to the ground. Fayt caught the cheetah's wrist and he threw him to the ground, headfirst. The cheetah hits the ground and is knocked uncontious. Fayt dusts his hands off as the fox jump-kicks him at his back. Fayt falls foreward and then onto the ground. The fox trys to wake up his friend but nothing was working. Fayt got up from the ground and he ran at an incredibly fast speed, which was much faster than that of the other two, and he jumped into the air at the fox, extending his feet toward him to kick him with both. The fox gets hit by Fayt's incoming attack and he goes flying back into a tree. Fayt slides on the groudn slightly and resumes running when he gets up. He runs to the fox and he grabs him by his neck. He lifts him off of the ground and he smiles, revealing his fangs. No longer could Fayt resist his hunger, he had to feed. Fayt's eyes glowed as he looked more evil, more serious. The fox quivered as he tried to get away but that was no longer possible. Fayt's grip on his neck then lossened but before the fox could do anything to escape, Fayt's hands grasped the fox's arms and held him to the tree.
"No! Please...don't kill me....spare me...please...." the fox said, begging for his life.
Fayt growled slightly but then said "No....you don't deserve to go on in this world.....see you in hell....." *Fayt then leaned in and bit the fox's neck. Blood spilled into his mouth as Fayt dug his fangs deep into the fox's skin. The taste of blood was fulfilling to Fayt, he now knew what he craved for and he enjoyed it. He bled the fox dry as he then tossed the fox's dead body beside his uncontious partner. Fayt was disgusted with himself for what he had just done. He couldn't believe what just happened
"This is what I hungered for......what have I become....?
Fayt didn't bother to bite the cheetah. He was more concerned with the girl that ran away not to long ago. He had to was the smell and taste of blood from himself. He ran through the forest and he came to where he knew water was. He bathed in the river and he shook himself dry. He then sniffed and he picked up the young girl's scent.
"There she is....."
For some reason he had to pursue the girl that he had just helped. He ran out of the forest that he once thought was endless. He came to a city's entrance. Near the entrance was a sign that said "Centari", which obviously was the name of this city. He began to walk into the city in search of the girl that caught his attention. Somehow he had to see her again.






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Balmung224
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commentCommented on: Fri Nov 26, 2004 @ 03:16pm
Now this part was not cool tatseshi i didnt like it...fox...cheetah? What were you thinking this is not a fairy tale...


commentCommented on: Sat Nov 27, 2004 @ 12:34am
Its not a fairy tale but it is a Tale about Anthro people. Incase you or anyone else don't know and anthro is an animal-person. If you or anyone want an exaple then just Pm me. Just for the record, Fayt is white-tiger and wolf. He is a hybrid *nods*



Tatseshi
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KitsuneNoYume
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commentCommented on: Sat Nov 27, 2004 @ 01:39am
I think it's really good so far.


commentCommented on: Sun Nov 28, 2004 @ 05:20am
Tat i'm predicting that this story is going to become good smile oh and balmung stare you should learn a bit about anime and anthros



kyochan542
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Balmung224
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commentCommented on: Sun Nov 28, 2004 @ 05:43am
shutup kyo i know bout anthros i though that fayt was just a vamp...i didnt know about anthros dont make me go to your house and hit you... stare


commentCommented on: Mon Nov 29, 2004 @ 02:36am
a fairytail?how? i think u wouldnt know a good story if it kicked ur a** .................... and good job on the story



The Spider-Pig
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Balmung224
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commentCommented on: Sun Dec 05, 2004 @ 04:03am
how bout i kick yours i know tatseshi better than you ever will...loser...


commentCommented on: Wed Dec 08, 2004 @ 12:13am
*is laughing* u kick my a**!? never in ur life u will! and im not a loser...jackass....



The Spider-Pig
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Balmung224
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commentCommented on: Wed Dec 08, 2004 @ 10:51pm
*cackles loudly* You beat me...hah! Never in your meaningless life will you beat me...so shut up...a*****e...by the way...go curl up in a ball and die...Not only is Tatseshi my friend in real life...hes one of my best friends and youll never get to know him like i do so just leave...you had to tick me off...i would have left you alone you had to try me...well you got your just deserts...


sincerly yours,
Chango's son
A.K.A Smooth Criminal...


commentCommented on: Thu Dec 09, 2004 @ 03:38am
Im sorry sycosuki...i was enraged i don't like having enemies on gaia being that gaia is a place to MAKE friends not make enemies...i express my deepest apologies no ones life is meaningless...tatseshi is my best friend in real life though....



Balmung224
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The Spider-Pig
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commentCommented on: Fri Dec 10, 2004 @ 01:09am
eek how did it go to go die to im sorry


commentCommented on: Sun Dec 12, 2004 @ 04:14pm
Can't we all just get along!? gonk Oh wait....you stopped fighting? sweatdrop blaugh



Tatseshi
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