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Every night I miss you more
While they stare into the darkness,
She still can see his eyes
Trying to study his thoughts and his feelings
She can feel that he is staring back softy

A smile flashes his face as he hugs her
He’s going to miss her like crazy till the next time they will be together
Everything from now on, they knew would be different
Hormones going crazy…but they could control themselves

He stares at her with a small smile, he knows, but yet, he needs to control
Everything he know’s, is now hers
His life is basically conjoined with hers
She is his everything now
Thoughts and actions drive him crazy
He’s going to be with her forever, and no one is going to stop him

While he looks at her, she smiles and giggles
She can’t help but laugh at what he is thinking
They sit in darkness, only they know
Music is playing in the background
A couple pecks are quickly given
She is going to be with him forever, she is practically sure of it

Nights like this just don’t happen so often
She wanted to show him another side that he had never seen
With a quick hug here and there, sparks are there
He knows she can feel them too

Sometimes lives can change
Days turn into night
He doesn’t want to leave
She doesn’t want to say a simple goodbye
It will be way to hard
Letting go of his hand so he can walk out the door, will rip her heart slowly..piece by piece
She will see him again..only in a week

Everything can’t be so bad
Nothing can change them
Time sure may fly, but one thing remains, the weeks and months do not
After a few years, they will be together
Only time will tell






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Tek_Nyne
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commentCommented on: Sun Feb 08, 2009 @ 01:37am
A few years? That totally sucks for them.
I like the way how the poem was really short, but its full of so much detail its like I already know everything about them.
I also like how it keeps changing from good to sad sentences, but in a way how the good mood still overpowers the bad.
I think this is one of the best short poems youve made. Kudos wink


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