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Renamore Enderlin's Big Problem This is a story about a girl who has multiple personality syndrome and tries to hide it.


pyrokitteh5
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Hydroloco the Meeting
As Rebecca was pacing, trying to figure out what to do, a young girl came up to them. "Anjali!?!?!?"

"Um, hi?"


"WTF? Who is this kid?" asked Flere.


"Fier, this is my best friend on Earth, Anjali. Why are you here, Anjali?"



"A wind elf told me to. Why do you ask?" she replied.


"Wind? In that case, why shuld you be trusted?" aked Flere.


"ANJALI! WHO ARE THESE PEOPLE!?!?!?! TROOPERS, SEND THOSE TWO DOWN, AND DONT HURT REBECCA OR ANJALI!!!" screamed Jyoti.

"NOOOO" screamed Rebecca.

Suddenly, a huge wave of water came crashing down on the troopers to reveal an illusion. The troopers were really just droids. Jyoti was powerless without his army.

"yessss." whispered Anjali to herself.
"How did you do that, Princess?" Flere asked.
"That wasn't me, it was Anjali." Rebecca replied.
"Hurry up! we cant risk loosing any copper!" flere yelled.
"Well, i have a way to escape. I have a ship nearby. Where do you need to go?" said Jyoti, being veeery helpful.





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mist777
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comment Commented on: Mon Jan 12, 2009 @ 01:31am
i noticed a typo, but not bad


comment Commented on: Mon Jan 12, 2009 @ 05:03am
Technically, the droids were under the illusion of soulborgs that i thought were extras. I had other troopers (all soulborgs of Deathwalker 9000 and 8000, Zettian Guards, and Glatiatrons), but they were nearby to secure the area i landed at.



Fox725
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mist777
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comment Commented on: Tue Jan 13, 2009 @ 04:29am
I have more chapters, though I try to add one each day smile


comment Commented on: Wed Jan 21, 2009 @ 01:25am
pretty good story so far. though i will reserve constructive criticism until it is finished.



Sir naphalatha
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