Listen to me now
here the words I will say
Write them down,take them in
Just listen today.
Listen to your heart
no matter what other people do
the heart allways knows best
it allways knows whats true.
Pleeze dont give up hope
I know you are crying
But those things they say
they all are just lying.
So stand back up
Get ready for a new day
Your problems are gone
because im here to stay.
I'll cast off your sorrows,
worrys and fears.
Never forget
that im allways here
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My(Not So)Creative mind
This just has stuff in it that i write...its mostly emo-ish and retarded love-ish type poums...not exactly about anyone i know....and if u like what u read comment...not like anyone cares about my crappy writing...
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It's better than all the other ones you've written, but I'm a grammar freak and can't examine it any further until you take care of the "ur"s