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Poetry
Just some stuff that i write time to time
I Am...
I am...
I am Amanda Torres
I wonder what life would be like in the future
I hear children cry out for help when they pretend to be happy
I see through people that are not okay
I want child and animal abuse to stop
I am Amanda Torres

I pretend im someone im not
I feel rejected when nobody wants me around
I touch stuff when i'm told not to
I worry when my friends arent happy
I cry when no one is around to hear
I am Amanda Torres

I understand other people's feelings
I say "nothings wrong" when everything is
I dream about a lonely world with only me in it
I try to keep my feelings bottled in
I hope someone will understand me one day
I am Amanda Torres






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Fatesight
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commentCommented on: Tue Dec 30, 2008 @ 02:59am
Hi! I just noticed you have a journal, so I thought I'll read it. This poem is pretty good; I guess I know some of the things you're writing about in it. You seem to be an interesting person; I'm looking forward to some more chances to talk with you. By the way, if I'm not mistaken, this poem is your "ars poetica" (I'm not sure if you're familiar with the phrase), right? But why is your name crossed out everywhere?

Anyway, best wishes:
Erinome, the guy you've met in a late-night Jigsaw game XD

PS: I apologize for my faulty English; it's not my native language...


commentCommented on: Sun Jan 11, 2009 @ 07:29am
i dont have a paragraph to say about this peom but i have is 2 awsome words

Epicly sexy



xD



--Epic--cominsoon
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