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lalalallalalalallalalalala, stories, part of my life, random stuff, XD
'k, here's my story i've written. hope u like it!!!
Orbia sat in her cubical slightly frowning, staring absentmindedly at the cold gray wall. After being labeled a “Class-A Minor Delinquent”, Orbia felt slightly miffed. For a fourteen-year-old, being a top-security-prisoner in Watern Prison was still a hard place to get to, but Orbia had just the luck to get there.
Orbia stood and went to punch the button. The door crept open.
“May I be of assistance Orbia?” answered the expressionless robot, wheeling toward her without a reply.
Orbia sniffed irritably, but did not say anything. She stiffly marched toward the repeated trail to Jen’s cell. Along the way many other security robots joined her and the guard cameras and robots stared when they passed by. Orbia pushed the buzz button and a moment later Jen’s door flew open.
“What’s up Orb?” asked Jen, raising her white blond eyebrows, “You’re not planning on escaping again are you?”
The robots tuned their sensory vibrates on the word “escaping”.
“Nah, done that too many times. Though I was really close last time.” Orbia answered.
It was true that Orbia was close to escaping the prison if no one had flung a broken security camera at her and cause her to loose her balance through the laser beams.
“Ha, that was probably Yen," Jen laughed, “he was throwing things everywhere.”
Orbia cracked a smile too, and then growled, “I’ll kill him later."
Together they walked to the Fence-Area where the prisoners were being served their meal.
As Orbia waited for her meal, she scanned the area, looking for Yen’s messy black hair. When Orbia finally saw him, she grinned evilly.
“Oh, Yen!” she yelled, and smiled innocently while her hand beckoned him over.
He couldn’t resist; Orbia’s beautiful, dark blue eyes, her short, glossy, black hair, and her ageless face resting in a slight smile. He came over, spellbound.
“Yeah, Orbia? Need something?” he asked, still gazing in her eyes with his magna ones.
“Hmm, I seem to have heard that you threw some things around, and one of them, apparently, hit me and made me loose my balance while I was trying to escape.” she replied.
“Ahh, that. Well, it was total chaos, and I was just adding those things for the heck of it.” he smiled.
“Maybe you can make it up,” Orbia said, and her wicked grin grew ever wider, and leaned heavily closed to his body, her face inches away from his, her hot breath brushed his face. Yen, having taken the smile as an innocent one, smiled and bent his face over hers, his eyes half closed with lust, his lips parting, and inviting.
Then, quite unexpectedly, Orbia punched his face, just when their lips brushed each other.
Jen, who was watching the entire incident, threw her blond hair back and laughed and so did everyone else.
Yen doubled over, his facing showing shock then quickly turning into a grin too, realizing what had just happened.
“Aww, sowy ‘bout that, though, you still want to kiss?” he asked, teasingly, his nose bleeding. Two of his buddies came over and helped him away, to the Medic-Room.
Orbia flashed the finger at him when he looked back and everyone in the Fence-Area howled with laughter again.

this is not really edited, but i will when i have the time...sorta lame names, yeah, i know, but i'll revise...






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Shirku Zero R-
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commentCommented on: Mon Nov 17, 2008 @ 02:37am
this is really good. You should write more to this.


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