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jounal of kaddie_momo
this will contain my story and my poems i write
Kissing loneliness
i'm alone in a dark place.
only pain fills in that space.
i miss you around me.
you are so far away from me.
you left me alone in a dark world.
alone, not wanting to talk to anyone.
i want to be alone
i want to go to the place were you are
i want you back.
why did you go to a place were i can't follow
do you think i can manage with on my own 'cause i can tell you were wrong.
living on while you are gone.
it's hard for me to understand that my live with you is in the past.
you are not around to comfort me
or catch me as i fall.
you are gone now, you are free.

-XxX- angelic






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Agharty
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commentCommented on: Tue Sep 30, 2008 @ 05:15pm
That's a mislove poem, I wonder what made you write that poem, even though I love it, I can say that I have felt something familiar, but the most important part is when you set someone free, that's the end or the beginning of anything possible.

But once again dear, the poem is incomplete without a name, can you imagine a person whitout its name, it will lack of personality, non existant and then it will be in vain to live that way.


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