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Dawn of a New World
Well this the my story Dawn of a New World mostly consist of alchemics and the search for Hiro, a ancient sword alchemic. Reid and Cruze are getting trained so they are prepared!
Dawn of a New World Continued
"Mom! Mom!" Cruze barges through the front door of his house. "Mom I finally got the medicine to cure your illeness, you don't have to be ill and be weak anymore."

"Cruze please don't shout." Cruze apologizes for his behavior when entering, he should have known that his mom still has sensetive ears. "So what are you bringing me this time Cruze?"

Cruze reaches out from his back pocket. "This medicine should cure your illness,i know all the past medicine just surpressed it for a while but this one will surely get rid of it."

"Cruze you don;t have to go through all the trouble of getting the cure for me, you're doing a great job of taking care of me so thats good." Cruze's mom coughs out blood onto the floor, she takes a few deep breathes to recover from the coughing.

Cruze runs to her side of the bed. "Mom please drink this medicine, I don't want you to die, not now, not ever, I don't know what I would do without you if you weren't here."

"Cruze you are a brave wolf and very caring as well but you don't need your mother here all the time, even if I die I will still watch over you. So stop moping around the bush, I'll take the medicine and tell your grandfather thanks."

Cruze paused how she knew that she knew her father made the medicine for her. "Oh your wondering how I knew your grandfather made this, you still need to train on how to get the scent of other off, I guess he didn't teach you that yet right?"

Cruzed sratched his head and replied happily, "Yes mother I still have a lot to learn."

"That's my wolf, listen your sister is coming here soon, so you go back to training and she will take care of me for a while okay Cruze." Cruzed noded and started to leave the house.

"Mom please stick around long enough for me to mature, I-I don't know what would happen if I lost you before that time came...so please promise me that you will."

"I promise Cruze." Cruze hugged his mom and left out of the door back to the old mans house.

Cruze passes his sister on the way back to the old mans house. "So I see little brother gave mom the final treatment, also the words you said were so teary I couldn't help myself to cry(sniff)."

You and your eavesdropping Aire, listen make sure you take good care of her, mom shouldn't move around alot, shouldn't lift anything very heavy, make sure she is fed good, also.." Aire interupptes him.

"CRUZE!"

"What?!"

"I know what to do, I know you care for mom with your life but trust me I can do this, you get back to training with gramps okay."

"Okay thanks Aire." Cruze runs back to the old mans house leaving his mom in Aire care.

"That wolf worries a little too much but I guess that's why Mom likes him the best."

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Meanwhile back at the mansion where Reid trains with Kai.
"I can't sleep tonight, I thought the training would wear me out so I could sleep a lot faster but I guess not." Reid walks outside to get some fresh air and see if he could learn a few things from the book of Hiro, there was that picture that showed up and it never appeared again. "Maybe that picture will show up again but that was just weird that I look through this hundreds of times and that picture isn't in this book at all."

Reid skims through the book but then suddenly there is a bright flash on the cover of the book. Reid drops the book and to find out that the picture is actually the map and real location of the sword, he couldn't look at it long. "Was that the real map, so the one I have isn't correct, I noticed the patterns and turns were completely wrong but the first place is right though. I better in form Cruze about this tomorrow, I'm sure he will be suprised."

"I'm surprised alright Reid, so the map in the musuem was a dudd."

"Cruze your here, why are you here anyway?"

"I kind of saw a bright light in the sky and it woke me from my sleep so I decided to check it out and what do you know, I happen to find you. So this map is the real thing, I saw bits and parts of it but we need to activate it again so we know where to go next."

Reid shrugged when Cruze wanted to see the map again. "Thats the problem, it just kind of brought up the real map and I don't know how to open it up again."

"I see, we'll find out some how but for the time being you should get some sleep, you have a big day with Kai and his training correct?" Reid noded. "That goes to the same for me, the old man says he is going to work my a** off tomorrow so I better get back before he finds out that I snuck out at night. Catch you later Reid."

"Alright Cruze!" Reid thought to himself how he would get the map to open back up, maybe he could use his alchemic abilities to open it but he didn't want to risk it but for now he went back to Kai's mansion for some well deserved sleep.

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____________________Cruze____________________________________________

Cruze woke up from his bed and got ready to start training with the old man again but due to his absense the training was put on hold. "Great! Where the hell did the old man go now, guess I can sniff his scent out"

Cruze traced the scent back the mansion of Kai. "Why would the old geezer be here, must be important." Cruze walked through the giant front doors into the living room."Hello! Old man are you here!" Cruze's voiced echoed through the halls of the mansion.

"Good you found where I was Cruze using your sensing ability, that's better than causing a comotion in the town." Cruze started to smile. "What are you smiling about."

"Mom wanted me to tell you thank you and I personally thank you as well! Thats all though got it old man. She called me on my cell last night and wanted me to tell you that."

"Oh I see."

"So gramps what is todays training then?"

"Your training today will be fighting your best friend Reid here, me and Kai are like you and Reid so this is how you fight better and learn how to trust your friends on a battle field, also you will know what alchemic artes they use."

"Oh I get it, me and Reid do fuse a lot about fighting though."

"Well you too better get it straight if you want to get to Hiro's sword with the real map."

"Wait how did you know about that?!"

"My eyes aren't that bad you pup, once training is over I will tell Reid how to open it."

"NOW YOUR EAVESDROPPING!"

"No I'm not, I just have very precise ears."

"Yeah, yeah, yeah whatever old man!"

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"Kai why are we in this room for?"

"This is the training room, the gravity is enhanced to train better, you'll be able to get better faster in this room, all your training will be all done in here from now on. Increase your gravity if you want but I want to tell you not to kill yourself but I know your smart enough to figure out not to go past your limits for so long. I will release training dummies in here for you to attack and guard again you, you can also use the full extent of your alchemic abilities as well, when you want to leave just got to this door and enter the name Kai at the top. Seem's your all set and ready, I leave everything to you Reid."

"Yes sir!" Reid focused his objective on getting stronger and not getting preoccupied with the book map position.

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"Delques Akashin, good to see you arrived here on time, did you bring Cruze with you?"

"You think I would forget to bring this knuckle head."Cruze nodes his head up and down.

"Cruze says you did forget him Delques."

"This pup is making up stories Kai, who you going to listen too, this pup or your best friend?"

"Gramps has a bestfriend! I didnt think you have any friends!" Cruze got hit on top of the head by Delques. "OW! I was just joking."

"So Delques you may rest here for the time being Reid won't be here because he is currently training in GER. Cruze that means Gravity Enforced Room, he will be training there for now on."

"Alright Kai, Reid should do find, he'll stick to his objective to get stronger."

"That's good, he will grow strong very strong in no time." Kai walked over to Delques.

"How have you been doing old friend?"

"You have to call me old man don't you, well old Kai what about you."

Kai laughes. "Delques you haven't changed a bit."

"So how long will Reid be in the GER Kai?" Cruze was kind of impatient and wanted to know when he will be out.

"Well that's up to him Cruze, Reid decides when to come out, he has a bed and food in there so he should be fine, you can go watch him but don't go inside and disturb his training." Cruze nods and goes to where Kai exited.

"Do you really think Cruze is not going to go inside?"

"He'll go inside anyway wont he?"

"Yeah thats me in my younger age."

"Ha, ha your right, master was teaching us and you came into the GER to help me out."

"Master was steaming and punished us both but we did get signifigently stronger due to that, we worked better as a team so he got us off punishment or temporarily cut it in half."

"Yeah well we better expect to punish them right."

"Hmm I'll think about Kai."

"Sure thing Delques."
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  • User Comments: [2]
    wolverain
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    Wed Aug 20, 2008 @ 02:58am


    ahhh soooooo awsome the first part made me cry well nearly cry


    shutupnkissme127
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    Mon Aug 25, 2008 @ 05:41am


    great job Xavier!!!! im really looking forward to reading more!!! post some more up!! can't wait!!


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