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The master... # 10
DANG IT NO ONE READS WHAT I PUT UP HERE!!! XD so now it's as large as it gets...=P anyway, since i'm sure you've stop reading this part by now i want to inform you (again) that if you coment on THIS one i'll inform you of the NEXT one...and i only post more when 2 people have commented on my last entry... stare


anyway, on a nicer note. thank oyu for reading this stupid story...even if you don't pay attention and help me out *growl*

wahmbulance A dark figure stood by the open closet. Not noticing the world around him, yet unable to ignore anything. A young girl, a maid, knocked on the door. Soft as a mouse, yet unable to disober orders.

"M-master? You...you wanted to know if the girl awakened...erm..." she trailed out as her scared blue eyes watched his evrey move as he paced from the window to the closet and back again. he turned to face her.

"Yes...have her brought to me...cloth her first though." The maid bobed an akwerd curtsy and spun around to flee down the hall. He knew it wasn't himself that scared the maids, he's never done anything wrong to them....simply what he was...or rather what he had become that made them terrified. they were natral enimies...wel, perhaps natral was the wrong word, instinkual was the better phrase. Her instinks told her to flee, but her head told her to stay. he was the preditor. he couldn't help it. He simply was. he turned to star out of the shadows to the yard out side of the window as her foot steps quietly faded away.
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Susan was still strugling to debati her delima when the maid returned. She was half expecting the girl to have the man following her, but instestead she had a cloth bundle folded ofer one arm. Susan blinkd sleepily.

later susan could only a hazy picture of a trmbling maid clothing her. Susan could almost convince herself that the maid was scared of HER...almost.



Susan found her self ushered down a halway that semed to grow darker the further the went down to stop infront of a large wooden door that was black with age. and worn smoth by years. the maid knocked once and opened the door. susan walked in. As if she was in a dreem. she saw the man...the master standing there staring out the window. She noticed he was pale, and his eye's were a startling shade of blue as her turned to look at them. As his gaze swept over the maid she shuddered. And susan wondered if her beat his servants... He didn't seem to be the type of man that would do such a thing. His face...was kind...ina staring-at-a-hungry-wolf-kind-of-way...The door shut with a noise that was too loud. she jumped and stared at the door. she turned to face him and found his studying her.

"erm....hello?" Susan found hersellf pausing as if she was in a spel...and realised the was STILL having one.she rubbed her head ruefully. as he jumped at her voice.

" Yes, hello... My name is-" a train whistled as it rumbled past behind the house, he cut himself off and they both turned to atare at the wall. wahmbulance

WHAT SHOULD HIS NAME BE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! YOUR PICK!!!!






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Winry_Rockbell799
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commentCommented on: Mon Jul 21, 2008 @ 02:34am
ooooh this is getting really interesting! I really want to see what's going to happen next and what they're going to talk about or do o_o Well, I'm not very good at coming up with names. I tend to like using traditional names, but I don't know if you want him to have a traditional name or a strange/interesting/creative name. sweatdrop Um, but I guess if I was going to say a traditional name, then I'd probably go with Nicholas? Or maybe Nathan? Or Jason? Lol, I'm not really sure, but those names might not fit him at all >< And I'm really bad at coming up with non-traditional names. Lol, sorry if that didn't help sweatdrop Anyway, let me know when you post the next chapter XD


commentCommented on: Mon Jul 21, 2008 @ 02:46am
realy i like Winry's thought of Nicholas. But if you want a more strange name i would say Wisinal. Pronounsed(sp?) with the S as more snake like...



Nejiha
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