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AAAAAAAAAllllllllllllll my poetry...well...most of it.( just to let ppl know I cant spell very well so tell me if I spelled anything wrong)
when you walk out in to the world on your own,
what happens to those happy thouts,
when something so terible,
so hurtfull,
so shocking happens,
what do you think ,
when some one you love,
some one so close to you,
betrays you,
in order for ther own happiness,
what they dont know yet,
is that they lost something that day,
both of you,
you lost your happiness,
they lost the only thing that realy matters,
you,
you may get over it,
but they wont,
in their minds thay are happy,
but in ther harts they cry,
they cry for some one to hold,
some one they can laugh with,
some one that they can tell their secrets to,
some one they can tell their feers
some one just like you.






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Sephiroth_Destrcution
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commentCommented on: Thu Aug 25, 2005 @ 04:20pm
AWESOME!!!!!!
Just like the first one


commentCommented on: Mon Jun 22, 2009 @ 07:47am
that was...deep..
spelling corrections below
line #...
2-thoughts
3-terrible
4-hurtful
10-their
20-hearts
24-fears



Koyomi-dono
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