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My extremly boring life
Well i had a science final exam today which i will be finishing tommorrow. school is a drag. good thing it will be over soon. in my writting class we are writting poems. when i showed mine to my friends: Spencer, Damon, Nathan, and Valerie Nate and Val said they were depressing, Spence said i was depressed and Damon said he hates poems. i have to write a thank u letter to some person who came to my school for homework. if i had a peice of paper that said school on it i'd shred it. if you want to hear my "poem of depression" here it is.
She's Gone
Forget your old life
She's no longer your wife
Since she got a hold of knife.
Forget the one you have wed
We all know she's dead
You haven't been fed
It can only be denied
But you still you do hide
From the world
Who knows how you hurled
That terrible, awful night.
Never would you take a flight
Because of how she saw
No type of flaw
In anyone but herself
Without you there to stop her
It's not your fault sir.
You had no clue.


please tell me about your oppinion. i don't mind crititsism. But don't get upset if i protest.

maddog012
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    Blazing Passion
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    Tue Aug 12, 2008 @ 01:38am


    Reminds me of Whiskey Lullaby.


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