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lets see if i can do a good story using ...'altered' characters....or just whoever i comu up with.....



...........nmad......cant think of anything.....







'i wish i could hold a star,just once.....' said Egi
holding his hand up to the sky,laying on the midnight dewed grass.
'what are you talking bout,Egi,you cant hold a real star.' replied Benni, laying next to Egi in the field.Egi,turning to his side,strait,medium brown hair falling in front of his face,asked
'what do you mean?why cant i?' his slender face confused like a child's
Benni,looking much like Egi,except having light,blondish-brown hair,just sighed.
'what?what?! tell me or i'll never know!c'mon Benni-chan!'
Benni just smiled,laughed a smal laugh and replied,
'because.a star isnt as small as it looks when we see it from here.they can be as big as earth or more.bu,besides all of that,they are a burning mass....if you touch it you'd just burn up!'
'oh,' said a dissapointed Egi, 'well,then i'll create a star that you can hold!!it wont burn or nuthin!and itll be small enough to fit in your hand!!'Egi said jolting upright and holding his hands up to the sky agian.
'heh,heh.....it might just work.after all,youve got the power to make dream a reality..!'
'huh?'replied Egi
the two sat under the starlit sky just staring at each other...for a very long time...


the end!! howd ya like it(if anyone reads it) i know its a bit rough but hey....
yes its a cliff hanger too!! heart