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Saints sachel
The ryme of time

one within or one without to be in love or be in doubt
gray days and black nights, twisting paths and lied lights
lonely roads wandered in doubt, riddled with loss and trajedy throughout
true loves won and lost, one's rejoice while the others at loss
lines of fate in ones own palm, yet the words of truth can bring one qualm
in life theres death in death theres life, each in turn by the pipers fife
though little to do can get much done, but now this rhyme must come undone



Dues Ex Machina




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Anen99
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commentCommented on: Sat Feb 02, 2008 @ 12:21am
Well... I know you don't know me, and I know I don't know you, but I absolutely love this. I've read the things you wrote on one of those thread thingamabobs too. You're very talented. Don't take this the wrong way... but especially for a guy. Girls do it just to be girls... and because it's the "popular" thing to do. But I think it's awesome that you do it. And extremely well I might add.


commentCommented on: Sun Feb 10, 2008 @ 10:58am
That was just... wow. I can't believe how good that was... not that I doubt you or anything it's just I don't know you so...yeah. But really I think that was one of the best journal entries I've read so far. ^^



Kumara Kawaii
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skyla55
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commentCommented on: Sat Aug 08, 2009 @ 07:26pm
Really love this one, I love your choice of words in your poems. It takes real skill to to string the words like you do!


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