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"Life"
By Dana

Life starts out,
like just a seed,
planted in the earth.

Then the seed,
works it's way,
digging through the dirt.

But unlike seed,
some life doesn't
have to work it's way.

Some life starts out,
like an ugly duckling.

The ugly duckling
has work too,
but a different kind.

This work could,
not be there,
if there was kindness.

But,alas, there is no kindness,
so the duckling works.

Luckily,this duckling will
be rewarded for it's work.

Some life starts out,
like a slave,
working to survive.

The slave has work too,
of a similar kind.

The slave works,
day and night,
working for it's life.

The slave works,
for it's fammily,
for it's feed,
for it's life.

The work is hard,
and unrewarding,
so the slave waits for death.

So when slave,
meets it's fate,
it's with open arms.


In some lives,
all it needs,
is a bit of kindness.

But,alas,
in these lives,
that is just a myth.

Of the three,
I'd rather live,
the life of the seed.



posted this for a writing contest,please let me know what ya think.

Good news every one!
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User Comments: [3]
swizzkitten
Community Member





Tue Jan 01, 2008 @ 11:15pm


WOW..really good mrgreen


noooooo000000
Community Member





Tue Jan 01, 2008 @ 11:38pm


Thanks mrgreen


Sephalesh
Community Member





Wed Feb 27, 2008 @ 03:42am


Another poem!?
Sad maybe
It's in the loam
of crying babies

Leave it alone
It needs no help
Give it only hope
Before death is whelped.

Sephalesh' poems make no sence, except to the fool who sees it.


User Comments: [3]
 
 
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