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-Joutei Dio-
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One of my stories
The Boy

There once was a boy. He didn't want to live anymore. His name was adam. He was 10 years old when everything went down-hill. His dog jack died. Adam was extremely depressed for weeks. Everytime he thought about him he would cry. Looking out his window, he rememberd how whenever he was sad and had a tough day, jack would come running to his window and hop up with his cute puppydog face. It would always make him feel better. But now....hes gone. Adam couldn't get over it. In many attemps to be reunited with his beloved dog, adam tried to commit suicide. He was scared to though. He wanted to see jack but he didn't want to die permanently. Adam, now filled with hatred for the world, longs for his canine companion once again. About 2 months later, a bright light at the end of the tunnle. A puppy was born. It was a girl. Adam and his family recived this puppy for christmas. A knock on the door, a puppy with a ribbon on its neck and in a box, is all it took for adams life to turn around. Bella is the dogs name. 1 year has passed and her paw is as big as she was when recived on christmas. Adam loved her with all his heart and now had a reason to live. As his life went on, adam got stronger, smarter, and knew that even though he felt like he wanted to die, he just wanted someone there for him. Bella and adam were best friends and hoped to be forever. A lot of time has passed. Adam now is very happy to be alive. now understanding that you shouldn't use a permanent solution, for a temporary problem.Adam is now 14 and has many friends to encourage him for life.



Thank you for reading my story. If you know who i am, you would know this is about my life. Everything in this story is true. Please give me a rating on this story and tell me what you thought. 1-10.





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Kairi1338
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comment Commented on: Thu Jul 26, 2007 @ 06:59pm
wow thats kid of scary about the suiside part but life get to us it sure has to me i have the same problem i cut my self but was qwickly stop from the incurigment of my friend i give ur storu an 11 smile


comment Commented on: Thu Jul 26, 2007 @ 07:21pm
Thank you!



-Joutei Dio-
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Kairi1338
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comment Commented on: Wed Aug 01, 2007 @ 12:47am
your welcome smile


comment Commented on: Thu Aug 16, 2007 @ 09:00pm
you wrote that? its soo good. Its like you took it from a book.. its really good-10



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Mrz_Conceited
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comment Commented on: Sat Aug 25, 2007 @ 07:02pm
10


comment Commented on: Mon Sep 10, 2007 @ 01:05am
wow awesome story biggrin i will give it a 10



Mrz_Conceited
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-Joutei Dio-
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comment Commented on: Thu Dec 11, 2008 @ 07:41pm
Thank you all very much! ^_^


comment Commented on: Mon Jul 27, 2009 @ 04:43am
10 smile if could rate higher i would biggrin



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