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Tears at Gunpoint ~Tears at Gunpoint~ He cries an ocean behind his mask Scared of the future, hurt by the past Time is turning, he is waiting Memories are quickly fading He can't move on, he's lost in time He can't pull himself from that distant state of mind Seeing the gun through eyes filled with tears Puts it to his head to end the unexplainable fears He lives a fairytale gone horribly wrong He is the last dying note of that sad love song

Posted by: I Speak Muffin Sat Jun 30, 2007 @ 06:34pm

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Commented on: Sat Jun 30, 2007 @ 09:42pm


	Aww that's really sad..but like omg good, I'm not just saying that but it is. But as you know my opinion is that of a movie critique whether or not my thumbs are up or down have never really mattered to the rest of humanity and I'd like to keep it that way. But know your poetry is enjoyed by moi. It really reminds me of a certain person..I'm sure you intended it and know whom I'm reffering to..well..this comment is getting long blinks uh...yeah...I think I'm done sweatdrop

Commented on: Sun Jul 01, 2007 @ 05:12pm


	crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying SAD

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