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It. Is. Coming. -->canyoufeelit?<-- Hey this is my first posted poem on Gaia... its called "Falling Awake" (I use the expression quite a lot... but only because I experience it...more than most). Its been the first time in a rather long time (at least for me) that I have even wanted to write... I thank those of you have contributed to the inspiration. You know who you are. ...Or maybe you don't. Anywho, I truly hope you enjoy... Falling Awake It is coming... Can you see it in bright, cloudless skies? Or at the darkest of night? The midnight hour? Can you feel it? Feel it on your fingertips? Can you grasp this, or did it escape you, Once again? It is coming And it is real Real...like your love, pain, flesh That I feel As real as my heart And the blood that runs through As red as the Ink That flows from this pen... Which thinks for me always Connecting the links: Fragments of my mind Sliding, slipping, Dipping in and out Ripping... My thoughts. I am losing... My stability. It is Coming. It is closing in. It is calling And I am falling... F a l l i n g Awake --L.

Posted by: Lane-pop Mon Jun 25, 2007 @ 06:14am

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Cheza Calanthe
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Commented on: Mon Jun 25, 2007 @ 06:40am


	I see you over there, over on the couch, and I wonder. Are you falling awake? Do you always feel it coming? I suppose you do. You write so smoothly. I do enjoy your style. <3

Commented on: Mon Jun 25, 2007 @ 06:46am


	Oooh! I likes this... it's alllll... nifty-like... I especially like the ending messed-up text-work... it, too, looks nifty...

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Samurai Kiiru
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Commented on: Mon Jun 25, 2007 @ 03:54pm


	This was awesome! I love how everything was pieced together nicely. And eventhough, I know you won't get this comment until you come back, I think you should keep writing. Let your emotions envelope you while you're gone, and then post your writings like crazy when you return. I love you, and I'll miss you uber crazy-ness while you're at Frenchy-French-Froogle-French-French Camp.

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