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Life is Useless.... no reason, i sit on my bed, thinking.... should it all end now? i twirl the dagger in my hands, hoping it would fall, into my heart... end it all, giving me a passage way, the easy way, my way, just wanting to die.... another day, just reach farther, dont give up, dont let hell soak up ur pain, let it out, cry, dont die.....

Posted by: Bloodfully In Luv Sun Jun 03, 2007 @ 07:03am

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Commented on: Thu Jun 07, 2007 @ 08:25pm


	OMG!!! i read all your poems and they are so good. biggrin

Commented on: Sat Jun 09, 2007 @ 02:09am


	Wow! I write depressing poetry too!! This is really.. emotional, yo! wink

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Commented on: Sun Jun 17, 2007 @ 01:25am

Commented on: Wed Jun 20, 2007 @ 05:03pm


	It's a tad bit emo. It's pretty good, though. But you should be less emo. Seagulls aren't emo, and look at them! They're the only birds that live on all seven continents! And they get FRENCH FRIES! Hot Topic is emo, and they don't have seagulls! And a lot of people won't go in there 'cuz it looks like the gates of hell! LALALALALALALA! Charlie the Unicorn's friends are emo, and they get free kidneys! Signed, Amy on one of her stupid idiotic Preppy days! 4laugh ninja pirate

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Commented on: Thu Jun 21, 2007 @ 11:00pm

Commented on: Fri Jun 22, 2007 @ 01:33am


	awwww that poem really made me cry a lil lol

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Commented on: Tue Jul 17, 2007 @ 08:22pm

Commented on: Wed Jul 18, 2007 @ 10:44pm


	A dark poem, usually results into a good poem. This one is dark and broody. I like it for that reason. The image it gives me a much clearer then the first one I read. Your word usage, its a bit lacking of creativity. This creates a poem easy to understand but sounds a bit bland. Just telling you how I feel about it, constructive advice. Please dont take it wrongly. Its a good poem none the less. ~Hiroko~

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Commented on: Thu Jul 26, 2007 @ 05:23am


	This is how I feel a lot of the time...you and i have a lot in common Blood...this one's really good....very deep I like it.

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