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Fever
Across the sea, an island awaits. It has been waxing and waning like the moon above it each night. I sit in the worn boat at the shore, pondering on the mistakes that just occurred. It riled my blood knowing regreting is useless. I stood up from the boat and looked around. Complete darkness. Walking without the guidence of a view before me, i stumble upon an unseen aura. I can feel its radiation lurking on the surface of my skin. It drew me into this tree, just an orddinary tree... until i touched it. My hands bursted in flames that rapidly spread throughout my entire body. I didn't feel the pain of the burn, more like a fever in summertime. I would call this spontaneous combustion, but before i knew, i can a collection of ash, slwly separating by the acts of the wind.






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Eternal Delerium
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commentCommented on: Fri May 11, 2007 @ 06:40pm
that last line was really good


commentCommented on: Fri May 11, 2007 @ 09:03pm
so this is how a fever looks like? lol mrgreen



Deaf-Nex
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Never Meltice
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commentCommented on: Sun May 13, 2007 @ 06:21am
curiosity killed the cat but at the same time your wisdom grew, its a risk we take everyday wink


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