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Twisted Fate
The rain falls down,
As tears of blood.
Making the town,
Soon to flood.
People scream,
Babies cry,
As sunlight's beam,
Begins to die.
Darkness covers
All around.
Families, lovers,
Even sound.
All is blank,
Everything ends.
What is to thank,
is fate's cruel bends.
- by DubleSided Devil |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/18/2009 |
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- Title: Twisted Fate
- Artist: DubleSided Devil
- Description: I've written two poems so far, and in my opinion this one that I titled Twisted Fate is better. I want to see how I did and how I can improve, so please rate and comment.
- Date: 06/18/2009
- Tags: twisted fate
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Comments (1 Comments)
- XXxxKarimaxxXX - 06/18/2009
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it is very good, in my opinion does not need improvements mrgreen
it must be hard to make everything rhyme
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