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The paths between heaven and hell
Are too powerful to be discovered by man
But the possibilities to end up in between
Are too impossible to comprehend and believe
The focus upon heaven and hell
Are on the minds of every individual
But the locations of these two places
Are unbelievably closer than they think
The moon and the sun are the destinations
In which people dream of living forever
So the obvious possibility for a hypothesis
Is that the moon and the sun are heaven and hell
The moon is the home of the angels
Where Jesus can turn his waters into wine
And God’s children celebrate with frolic
Drinking his son’s gifted wine till their hearts contempt
The sun is the home of the devils
Where there is only one lord, one master
Satan’s demise and cruelty are the only rules
To those whose sins have stricken his sight
There are only so many values
To the religions of those who believe
Their sentimental values of the gods
Are as pure as the cries of new born children
To those who have lived a life of virtue
The moon is the next destination of happiness
The simple minded fools they look down upon
Have nothing but guilt upon their shoulders
To those who have lived a life of sin
The sun is the next destination of sorrow
The simple minded fools they look up above
Have nothing but wings to carry upon their souls
The mortals of earth to this day
Are filled with both happiness and despair
And the only cure to the everlasting pain
Is the opening of the door that unlocks their destiny
The war of the gods is still occurring
And have been since the first seconds of time
Though the moon and the sun still shine within time
The fight for peace shall rage on, day by night
Christopher B. Jarvis II
- by Furionsrotm56 |
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- | Submitted on 10/24/2008 |
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- Title: Pleasures and Desires
- Artist: Furionsrotm56
- Description: No matter where you are, your destiny follows you whereever you go... the door to your destiny, however, is a far off place, in which you much search for, not with your mind, but with your heart...
- Date: 10/24/2008
- Tags: pleasures desires
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Asphyxiating Illusions - 10/24/2008
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Its by far deeper then the other entry "A touching poem".
If its just here to win, then i don't think it has a good chance though, providing different views and such. In my opinion, its a 5/5. - Report As Spam
- latina_lover_forever_m - 10/24/2008
- this is very cool
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