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Life got you down
with know where else to go?
You've got everything thrown at you,
And you've took every blow.
Still I see you standing there
With every inch of pain,
Letting it seep inside
Wanting it to go back from where it came.
Social life's a wreak
And your family's distrought
Its like a tornado of drama,
With twice as much Chaos.
So there you are just standing there
Without a single tear,
Looking anywhere for someone,
When you could of just looked right here.
But let go of all your pain,
Release it from inside,
Of all the advice I could say to you
Two words only fit,
Just Cry
- Title: Of All the Advice
- Artist: Spicesayy
- Description: inspired by a poum i read on here.......i decided to write this poum to cheer up anyone who feels like crap....hopefully u can be happy-fied :P
- Date: 05/16/2009
- Tags: advice cheer help
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Comments (1 Comments)
- PoeticWindstorm - 05/19/2009
- i think thats very considerate thank you very much smile and over all your poem is pretty good
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