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I'm captive by a merciful jailer,
Abandoned on a tropical Island,
With a visible line forbidden to cross and
Vicious mosquitoes biting me alive.
The drips of sorrowful tears running
Down my face,
As i pray determindly for freedom like
The soft breeze,
But my eyes of anger had dampened
My soul.
Relying on Kensuke's food and drink,
Surviving on this Island became an easy thing,
But when everything twists and everything turns,
Will i ever escape from this mysterious Island?
- by LunarViolet123 |
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- | Submitted on 10/16/2008 |
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- Title: Captive
- Artist: LunarViolet123
- Description: This poem is based on a book called 'Kensuke's Kingdom'. You'll know what the poem is about if you have read the book. (book cover in reference picture)
- Date: 10/16/2008
- Tags: captive
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Yellow Sunnies - 10/30/2009
- Oh when i was in year seven I had to do all my work based on this book, English, science, math, art, geography you name it! I've read it like 20 times >.< Btw nice Poem!
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- LunarViolet123 - 01/11/2009
- your welcome!
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- jjustoo - 12/05/2008
- read kensukes kingdom i have. thanks to you post.
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- LunarViolet123 - 10/17/2008
- lol thanks for the comment! if they're is anything you think i should improve on then don't be shy just say it because i want to make it 5/5 next time!
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- mexicantacos2003 - 10/16/2008
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its good
survival
ive never actually read any survival poems
(maybe journals and letters but not poems)
it gives you a whole new perspective.
ill give it a 4
its almost a 5 but its not perfect and if i could i would give you a 4.7
but i cant
keep writing this is good stuff - Report As Spam
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