- I stood there wating for something. I didn't know what. My skin was as hot as the summer sun, but my bones were as chilled as ice. I stood there in the cold; the wind blowing against my face. I heard something. The wind suddenly stopped and there was silence. The only thing breaking the silence was the sound of my breath and my heart beating endlessly in my chest. I kept listening, waiting. I heard the noise again. It was like church bells ringing. I realized it was a human voice. The voice stopped. I kept listening and waiting for the voice to call out for me again. Sure enough it did. I looked around expecting to see something. I saw nothing. I kept teling myself that the voice was real. It had to be. I looked around at the white prison around me. I looked around still expecting to see something, but I couldn't. As soon as I was sure that the voice was a figment of my imagination, I saw the figure of a man walking towards me. I couldn't control myself. I had to run. I had to! As I was running, the figure vanished. This was surely the end of me. But I pressed on. I kept running in the direction of the figure, but he was gone. I had to stop running. I was tired, hungry and cold. The chill of the winter air made my teeth chatter. I was shivering. I laid down on the cold snow and slept. When I woke up, I was stunned at what I was seeing. The figure of a man stood over me. The man I saw earlier! I couldn't beleive it. He piicked me up and carried me back to his helicopter. Still to this day, I won't know the voice and figure of the man that saved me from the end of my life.
- by BETALOVER_96 |
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- | Submitted on 07/28/2008 |
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- Title: The Voice
- Artist: BETALOVER_96
- Description: I wrote this just for fun. I really enjoy it and I hope you guys do too! please comment to no end. But nice and encouraging comments only please and thank you! Note: this did NOT really happen to me. When I talk of the summer sun, it means that I'm hot and cold at the same time. i have been hot and cold at the same time and it is AWFUL!!!!!
- Date: 07/28/2008
- Tags: fictionalvoicefigure
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Comments (3 Comments)
- DJ Hotplumpnicoleprimaj - 12/14/2008
- really i like that it is very good
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- surelychoo - 12/13/2008
- cool! but how about paragraphs? i kinda got confuzzled
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- evil_dr_monkmonk - 07/30/2008
- one thing...you said that it was summer and winter at the same time.... makes no sense.
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