Online love

• Artist: Bedlight
• Description: Love knows no bounds.
• Date: 11/28/2008
• Tags: online love

Her personality is as beautiful as a thousand roses in bloom.
My love for her is so great it'll lead me to my doom.

Her kindness is as plentiful as the sun's great shining rays.
I swear to the stars i'll follow her untill the end of my days.

I would do anything to make her smile even if just a grin.
My love for her is so great & terrible it has to be a sin.

But the truth is i've never laid eyes on her before in my life.
Yet the moment I met her my heart felt as if it was stabbed by a knife.

This woman I so desperatly love, I don't even know.
To love some one I met online, have I sunken this low?

Online or not this love is true & to her memory i'll hold fast.
This love of mine & the memory of her forever they will last.

Comments

[fireshadowkatdemon]

That's cute. 5/5. This is so true.

[ToxicDarknessLemon]

Uhm, confession time? ^^ I met my true love there. ♥♥♥♥♥ count the hearts and you shall se, the rating you shall get from me. ^^

[Xx-Your Tortured Soul-xX]

Finnaly some1 knows how i feel thats the same way i feel about a girl i met online good job doin this dude ^^

[Twisted Waterfalls]

awww thats so sweet, the girl your talking about has got to be lucky

[dreamless_bunny]

aww how cute ^_^ i love it 5/5

[shinsetsu moriko]

I understand where you're coming from
and the issue is generally foepah and what not

but don't worry quite so much about the rhyming next time
a few of the lines seem too stressed and out of place
simply so they could rhyme

^_^

[XXkams]

wow...very romantic