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the gun in my sweaty nervous handis heavy . the trigger just waiting to be pulled and me willing to do it.my other hand was occupied by a phone where the sweetest voice pours and sobs trying to convince me this is not the way."please dont do it you have so much to live for!"like i havent heard that before.i tell her that she cant convince me. she screams.i try not to cry or make a big deal out of this to show her, to prove to her that this is what i want."please!"she cries out.i tell her goodbye..."goodbye" then i love her..."i love you".....point the gun at the side of my forehead.......pull the trigger......
the body drops......the phone crying.......
name:billy wilestone
age:18
date of death:january 8,20007
cause of death:suicide/shot in head
- by Ghost Fudge |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: life and or death prt 1
- Artist: Ghost Fudge
- Description: suicidle teens have differet ways of settling things out../i was bored i dont think its good
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: lifedeathsucide
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Ghost Fudge - 01/02/2009
- yea i know what you mean thanks for telling me
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- Lambchop121 - 01/01/2009
- omggg so descriptibe and moody! T.T i think you should leave the brains part out though.. it kinda killed it. but very cool even though it was short >.<
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- Ghost Fudge - 12/31/2008
- woohoo.thnx for commenting. comment more plz. read prt two
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- Layla_BumbleBee - 12/28/2008
- I cry because i like it a lot........YAY!!
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- picedog - 12/26/2008
- sad but nice goob
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- Nana Shinu Ai - 12/22/2008
- this poem is good so many sadness of grief and stuff
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- Lady Elsy - 12/14/2008
- i think i can convince you otherwise
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