- Standing still knee deep in the freezig waters of the ocean. I look down and see goose bumps start to rise out of my skin. I decide to return my gaze to the setting sun, but then I see something. A shining silver. Probably a fish. Then I look back up, the sky now a faint peach color. The slowly retreating water felt wonderful, yet it couldn't lift thisviel of saddness that was around me. Then slowly out of my left eye comes a tear. The silver drop slides down my face and off my cherry red lips into the sea. Sliding gracefully aswell as silently into the salty water causing a small ripple. I watch my tear as it slides into the water and melts into the ocean. Now another tear falls into the water slowly melting and dissapears with the retreating tide. I can't hold back. Now tears a falling back in the water, slowly ruining my make-up. I fall into a soundless sob. I can see the fish coming towards me through my tears. I feel something touch my foot. Instantly sending a chill up my back, a small giggle comes out of me. The fish was trying to lighten my mode I thought, yeah right. But still the fish continues to tickle my foot.
- by DNAngel jake |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 08/15/2008 |
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- Title: The Tears and the fish.
- Artist: DNAngel jake
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I lengthed it up. its a upgraded version of tears. FYI im water jake.
I hope u liked it. if u did plz tell me wat about it u liked. - Date: 08/15/2008
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- DNAngel jake - 08/15/2008
- sorry jus edited it. several misspelled words
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