THIS IS A POEM ABOUT 2 LOVERS

• Artist: alexandera 180
• Description: this is a short poem ABOUT A GIRL WHO WAS NOT ALOUD TO SEE HER BOYFRIEND BECAUSE OF HER DAD SO SHE SNEEKS OUT TO SEE HIM AND THERE LOVE IS STRONGER THEN HER FATHERS WILL!
• Date: 12/14/2008
• Tags: poem aboutlovers

I WISH I MAY I WISH I MIGHT FLY WITH YOU THREW THIS EMPTY NIGHT.HIGH UP IN THE AIR I SEE A FAIR.TIME TO GO BUT I WISH TO STAY I DO NOT LIKE TO BE FAR AWAY.I LOVE YOU ALOT BUT I HAVE TO GO.I WILL SEE YOU AGAIN WHEN WE HAVE SNOW.I WICH THESE RULES WERE NO LONGER SO WE CAN BE TOGETHER FOR EVEN LONGER.MY DAD WILL DIE IF HE SEES US IN THE SKY.I CRY BECAUSE I HAVE TO SAY GOOD BY.IF YOU MISS ME ALL YOU HAVE TO DO IS CLOSE YOUR EYES AND BRING BACK YESTER DAY AND WELL BE THERE TOGETHER LOVE WILL TURN BACK THE HANDS OF TIME!

Comments

[Chi Chu x3]

That's kinda my situation right now, but opposite :33

[Memory Anthem]

u made me remember him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
5/5 though lol

[Fantastic Nightmares]

It's hard to read. It's good but it can be better. And by that I mean, there are two special keys on your keybord: The one that says "Enter" and a long one which is space. try using them when making a poem like this one. k?

[kurtainz]

I LIKE IT.
MAY I ASK WHY ITS ALL IN CAPS?
5/5

[legion_sasori09]

nice writing!

[relinquisheddream]

I like it!
but it is a little hard to read in the big font and no periods.

[Six Billion of Spades]

Wow. The screaming, cheesy forced rhymes, and lack of punctuation and style really emphasize your main theme.

And the belief that wishing upon a star is a new, original concept really captures the naivete of the narrator.

5 BAJILLION STARS LOL