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We enter a seemingly calm, two story building to the left of an abandoned studio building. If we were to say nothing was in this room we would be lying. Scythes, swords, razors, nails, some skeletons and more sharp or violent weapons scattered around the room. As we venture past the first room, we slip into the main hall. From rooms with doors shut and possibly locked, we hear screaming, moaning and other disturbing, sickening noises.
Thus proves this is a house of a twisted individual...
The next room we show has stacks of televisions, only small number of these sixty odd tellys. Around the room we observe DVD cases, VHS cases and ruined electrical equipment. We also see a hobo sleeping in the corner...
The next few rooms are locked, so we go down the stairs into the basement. The room is dark and murky, the exceptional groan coming from the far right corner. As we get closer to the groaning, we get further from the stairs, we need to turn on a flash light. We shine the light on the groaning Zombie, the name 'Quorky' written on his head in a fine black sharpie. He just stands there and stares at us with his dim, retarded eyes. We think he is planning something so we run out... No sight of the woman or man of the house yet...
We get up to the second floor with a few more doors open, and we walk to the first one. In this room, there are musical instruments, a red Flying V bass, a red keyboard, a purple guitar and a stolen drum set, all instruments originally belonging to Murdoc Niccals, Stuart '2D' Tusspot, Russel Hobbes and Noodle, the band Gorillaz. Looks like we have a thief on our hands...
Another room is labled 'the Chill Room', the room where people would just hang out and sit around and talk, play vido games, draw or anything else imaginable.No one seems to be in this room...
Th next room is that of Darkness and Chaos. Two people literally named, Darkness and Chaos. The pair lay asleep on their bed, Better not wake them!
We come to the final room, to where we see a female wearing an inhalation mask sitting on the bed. She hasn't noticed us yet, so she only sits there listening to her music... "Nice try, dullards..." Rei slips behind the group of men, her mask off. She begins, one by one, killing them to the pounding notes of Metallica's Enter Sandman. For the first male, she shoves her fist into his stomach and rips out his intestines, biting hard into his shoulder and tearing a lengthy piece of skin off. The next male to die was next to the first. Rei tore his head off with ease. throwing it down the hall. Rei slit th third male's throat, the blood pouring out of his jugular vein. The man screamed and she jammed her fist into his mouth. The final man was the fourth man, who sat on the floor, cowering in fear. He had already pissed himself, causing Rei to cackle darkly.
"I'm gonna make you wish you never came in my house... Only a select few can EVER come in here...." She growled, taking the man in a locked room. "This is the torture room. The room where you shall die a tortured death." She growled as she chained him to the table. She lifted a scalpel and slowly pressured it into his chest cavity. She pulled down on it slowly, tearing through the flesh of his chest and stomach area. He cried. She growled and walked over to a desk, opening a drawer and pulling out a ball gag. She tied it around his mouth and went back to the process of slicing open the chest cavity and the stomach. She pries it all open and the man cries harder. Rei, being just so mean, cackles.
"Want me to go slower? Alright..." She slowly penitrated the left lung with the scalpel, cutting it open. The man gasped a bit. She left the scalpel there and stabbed his heart with a screwdriver, blood almost instantly spewing out. She cackled a bit more. The man tried gasping for air. He thrashed weakly but the rusted tool only went in deeper. His movements slowed to a stop. his face went pale. Rei cackled. "now I'll just leave you for Quorky and Bob..." She took a few simple steps to the sink in the room and turned the water on, cleaning the blood from her hands. She whistled low and in the door way appeared two, slow minded yet fast stepped zombies, Quorky and Bob "Have fun." She pointed to the mad on the table. The Zombies crept over to the body and began feasting away.
"There are three more in the hall.." She whispered.
The zombies begin to tear the man to shreds as Rei steps back into her room, leaving the door open so she could watch if anyone else came into her house, her eyes staring over a drawing she had been working on. She looked at it and grinned smugly, red colored pencil covering most of the picture. She laughed lightly, going back to coloring the picture with the pencil.
- by Down With The TWITCHness |
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- | Submitted on 08/17/2008 |
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- Title: Description - The psycho house
- Artist: Down With The TWITCHness
- Description: Just a description.. WARNING: RATHER GORY AT THE END. No flamers, you will be reported
- Date: 08/17/2008
- Tags: gorezombies
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Comments (4 Comments)
- EmoAlicia20 - 04/03/2009
- oooo i like it! It's creepy and gory. My favorite style of writing!
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- Down With The TWITCHness - 08/25/2008
- Thanks, both of you!! <3
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- QueenMoonDream - 08/17/2008
- wow. nice gory scene. 4/5 stars.
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- Darkeydance - 08/17/2008
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Okay then:
Pros:
Nice amount of diffence in words. I didn't feel like reading the same part over and over again.
Nice descriptions of the rooms.
Nice description of the gory scene.
Cons:
Not very scary.
No deeper meaning.
No parralles to the rooms. It seem completly coincidential.
BUT! It was only a discribtion as you say, so i would give you 7 or 8 of 10 wink - Report As Spam