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	Broken down siren
	Broken down siren


Mood ~Gatekeeper~ Music ~What Happens Tomorrow - Duran Duran~ <center>The rain is falling It's the only thing, I know That keeps me alive Listen to it's singing .Whisper. ~ Such a deadly sleep To never dream again Just lay down and let go To let it within you creep .Whisper. ~ It hides your tears so well Like the merging of rivers Blood and sweet pure water Inside it's dark cover I fell .Whisper. ~ A song so sweet it's cold The chills of a sudden storm I only know what it is now To it my eternal soul I sold .Whisper. ~ I knew this day would come It's icy fingers found me I want to stay here but I have to go And the clouds open some .Whisper. ~</center> Paranine · Thu Feb 17, 2005 @ 02:33am · 7 Comments


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	That's a pretty interesting perspective on death...I seem to always like the last stanzas of most of your poems. Like when you say the clouds are opening some, like the Gates of Heaven or something. And if it's not about death, then merde, I interpretted it wrong. xp Offline Viirage · Community Member · Thu Feb 17, 2005 @ 03:58am


	It is about death 3nodding heart So you were right...I guess the last is better then the rest since I am "warmed up" by then sweatdrop Offline Paranine · Community Member · Thu Feb 17, 2005 @ 11:44pm


	That's good. And I think the whole thing is beautiful, I just seem to have a fondness for your last stanzas...how you basically "wrap it up" so cleanly and so finely, is what I meant. Offline Viirage · Community Member · Fri Feb 18, 2005 @ 12:53am


	Whoo! xp Offline Happy0 · Community Member · Fri Feb 18, 2005 @ 01:06am


	Why thanky you Razzy ^_^ Offline Paranine · Community Member · Fri Feb 18, 2005 @ 05:22am


	Yer welcome, Sir. Offline Viirage · Community Member · Tue Feb 22, 2005 @ 10:26pm


	At ease, Lieutenant 3nodding Offline Paranine · Community Member · Wed Feb 23, 2005 @ 09:34pm

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