#1. across the ocean far far away deep in the jungle my hearts locked away can you find the key the key to saving me is your heart pure is it insecure if i hold you will you brake if i kiss you will you shake across the ocean into the sea im waiting can you see me i held out my hand you didn't understand instead you swam away... #2. into my arms my angel will fly my black wings will rise my teeth will show, and he will know im his demon the dark side of himself he didn't know i held him close he stayed with me i showed him how evil he could be the love in his eye's slowly died they faded to hate for me he flew away, and before he left he turned to say "you were too much for me to handle and you lit my candle you took away the pain you melted away the sarrow i dont deserve you so i'll go away" he slowly left me behind to rot in hell and close my eyes the tears rolled down as my soul slowly died... #3. if i crawled to you would you take me? or would you be cruel? would you hold me, and rock me to sleep? or would you kick me, and beat me? would i live in your heart? or die in your arms? is your soul pure and kind? or is it evil on the inside? can you tell me? or would you lie? would you do it? or rather die? #4. the flames burned cold to the touch like ice they froze all of them up now they brake with a single snowflake winter has come atlast to my suprise i opened my eyes it was spring once again with a blink came summer with beautiful things a twitch and fall appeared soon it was near ...and the icy flames returned. the burned. #5. i seen i saw i came to fall but not right now for i have wings i fly free above you and the sea no one can contain me finnaly im free! #6. im crazy im insane im love im hate im a cat im a dog im a hat im a frog im nothing more then a stump in your yard taking a chance to make you happy that is what im all about. #7. down to hell you go to burn and spend all eternity in firey rivers and sea's down to hell you go you broke my heart so i broke your soul down to hell you go you hit me once thats all it took down to hell you go i tore you up you came crashing down down to hell you go if you come back from your sleep i'll take my axe and slice your feet down to hell you go you cant walk and soon you cant talk i sliced your lips off down to hell you go i will never love gain it all your fualt down to hell you go i took my pain forced anger down to hell you go now all i have to offer is my soul down to hell you go the devil gladly took it i became his bride down to hell you go now i torture your soul... #8. across the heavens im waiting on the mountian i sleep in the clouds lay my dreams all the birds carry me voice the water soothes my soul my head spins around as the darkness consumes me i cannot be found yet out of the ashes a new me is born torturing the lives of the happy the innocent are killed my eyes glowing blood red not light green all i know now is in all of this it spins around me.
It's a little sad, but the message is clear. Keep makin' those poems, and you'll improve. Something that you're already good at is making the message clear though. Continue like that.