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color o teh day:
acidic green with tinges of black
mad
ok...
im not talking to rachel. anybody who reads this, DONT BE A FRIGGEN MESSENGER! if she askes you to ask me why im mad at her dont do it.
it will just make me mad at you, and you dont want that, now do you? 3nodding
anyway
i think im going out with Jordan... It's all so confusing....
Bwah. I dont like it when it feels like my heart is being torn inside out and i want to just crawl into a corrner and die.
i feel like pudding
pudding with nerve endings.
pudding in great pain.
but enough of that!
i'm finally starting my story!
I'm making it up as i type, so dont be too critical, but still give me some feed-back. (and not jsut "oh, it's good" or "yeah, i like it" or "it sicks" tell me why. )
right.
here goes nothing....
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I think if she wasnt my best friend, I would hate her. Clara refrained from rolling her eyes as Sarah laughed at her own stupid joke, then cocked her head and gave Clara a look that said are you ignoring me again?.
why, yes, Sarah, yes i am. The May sun played through the massive oak trees in the recess yard as the 100 or so middle school kids enjoyed the much needed warm day. the usall group humg in their usall spot; just beneith one of the larger oak trees in the corrner of the yard.
Jayden was reading her book,and Max was trying to talk to her. Clara was picking at the grass as Sarah launched into how much loved whatever she was talking about. Skylar was shooting Cake ditry looks as they tried to gain clara's attention. Cake wasnt his real name. But that was jsut what everybody called him and not even Clara knew his birth name. She sure hoped that it wasnt Cake.
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you know what?
i dont like the third person view. stare
i want to get further into the thoughts of the main caracter....
doo over!!! biggrin
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I think if she wasnt my best friend, I would hate her. I refrained from rolling my eyes as Sarah laughed at her own stupid joke, then cocked her head and gave me a look that said are you ignoring me again?.
why, yes, Sarah, yes i am. The May sun played through the massive oak trees in the recess yard as the 100 or so middle school kids milled around or played basketball and enjoyed the much needed warm day. My usall group hung in our usall spot; just beneith one of the larger oak trees in the corrner of the yard.
Jayden was reading her book,and Max was trying to talk to her. I was picking at the grass as Sarah launched into how much she loved whatever she was talking about. Skylar was shooting Cake ditry looks as they fought over their next new crush. Cake wasnt his real name. But that was jsut what everybody called him, i guess. I dont even know his real name, and i went out with him for a month or so! I sure hope the poor kid isnt actually Cake on his birth cirtificate.
Life seems pretty much like yours, right? Ha! guess again! do you knhow what my favorite passtime is?
looking at the shimering multi-colored phone numbers floating above everybody's head. yeah. phone numbers. better yet, floating phone numbers. but thats just me.
I mean, the eyes that i have are really usefull for being a creepy stalker and getting the cute guy that you meet outside of the dollar trees phone number, but i would much have somebody elses vision.
like jaydens. She can see what peoples attention is focused on. Or Cake, who can see the bonds between people. Or even Sarah, who can see where people are going next. But im also half glad for mine. it doesnt normally croud the air. though i did learn in sience class that most people have to focus on a person to view them with their eyes.
and by eyes i mean their tallent. Everybody has one. Some are more common than others, but everybody i know can see somthing special about somebody. Usally what you can see affects your whole life. so in that case i have no clue what i'll become.
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ummmmmmmmmmm yeah.. thats all i have...
its not even up to a whole chapter yet!!! gonk
oh well.
i think ima go kill little computer people now. or do homework. whichever.
syonara!
 TheMusicNote · Wed May 13, 2009 @ 03:46am · 0 Comments |
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