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Hikari-san13
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Hey guys
I finally wrote part 2 of my story!!! =D
Here's da link so VOTE!!
oh I included part 1 too...
]http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=100644289


Part 1

The fog was unbearable. And the rain was dropping out of the sky wet and cold. In a small village called Calm Water, two children was in a meadow outside the village. It was their secret place where they would play. There was no other children among the villagers. You see, it was a very small village far away from town or other villages.
"Are you sure we're aloud here when its so foggy and wet?" mumbled Lina.
"They won't know." smiled Nastumi.
"Hey? Can you make a promise?"
"Anything."
"Can we stay together forever?"
"Absolutely!"
And after that they both held hands. Soon Lina and Nastumi began to smell smoke. When Lina turned around, the village was on fire!! Fear for her parents she began running toward the village. When Nastumi and Lina arrived, blood was at their feet and vicious vampires were killing the villagers. Their fangs dripping of blood was so hard to look at. Nastumi scream as a vampire started feeding on his mother. The vampire looked at Nastumi and smiled. It wasn't a normal smile. It was filled with evil. The vampire rushed at Nastumi and beared his fangs. Lina couldn't stand it ,so she went in front of Nastumi and the vampire reached for her fragile neck and bit it. Lina screamed in pain. In a few minutes she was lying in a pool of blood. She could see Nastumi crying out to her.
"No!! No!! Lina!!" Nastumi cried.
"I-I'm sorry... I couldn't fulfill our promise..." Lina spoke in a whisper.
After she said those words Lina fell into the darkness still thinking about Nastumi.


Part 2

I plunged into the darkness. There was pain everywhere, but I was surprisingly calm. Is this heaven? Couldn't be. There was too much pain and darkness. I heard a voice.."She's lucky. Looks like she's going to make it," inspected the calm, soft voice.
"Hmph. Lucky for her Alec was the one who bit her or she would be dead."
I was bitten? Oh yeah...I traced back into my thoughts to remember. The vllage was being attacked by vampires and there was something else...I thought about it for a few seconds. Nastumi! I now have so many unanswered questions! Was he dead? Was I dead? I fluttered my eyes open. My vision was blurry for a second and I saw a beautiful woman. Her creamy eyes was so hard to look at but was even harder to stare away. I managed to stammer, "Wha-"
"Don't worry, "She inturrupted,"Your human eyesight is just trying to get use to it." She continued, "A pure blood bit you. That is why you are alive today." Her voice was so mystical I could barely inderstand her words. But I knew it at that second what had happened. I glanced over at that strange woman and she smiled weakly. I was now shaking. I knew....I knew that when she smiled, she felt sorry for me. That I would lead a more dangerous life than I ever would have imagined.


Few Years later...

I swiftly walked down the main hallway towards the room. Inside that room was the group of dangerous vampires that would assign me my next mission. It could be anything. To bring a certain person captive, to spy an enemy, or even to execute someone. I had executed numerous numbers of people before. I didn't ask why they were being executed. It could be because they hate them or anything. I didn't care. This was the only reason I existed. I opened the door that would decide my fate. There was 7 people inside. All in a row seated. I could see their perfect faces and their dangerous expressions. I kneeled respectfully and waited.
In a clear voice that seemed unhuman, a woman that sat in the left ordered, "You will execute Sam Conaway. He is located in a high school and you shall go undercover as a high school girl. All the information you need is in the envelope that we shall give you. I suspect it will be fast and done swiftly." Her eyes glistened dangerously towards me.
"Of course." I replied. in a calm matter. And I recieved the information in a small envelope and walked out as soon as possible. Who knew this mission would change my life forever.

"We have a new student today!" Announced the teacher. She looked over at me waiting for me to introduce myself.
"My name is Annie. I look forward to meeting you all." I murmered. I had to use a fake name just in case an enemy was here. I looked around the room and I found my target. He was looking at me with wide eyes. I could hear his heart beat going faster as I sat myself in my seat. Then something surprised me. It wasen't the taget, it was the guy sitting next to me. He was glaring at me with hatred in his eyes. I couldn't help but stare at him. Something reminded me of him...I don't know what.
After class when everybody left, I went over to Sam and flashed a smile.
"Do you mind staying after class to talk with me? I've taken an interest towards you." I said in a sweet voice. He turned red and was speechless. He managed to answer,
"S-sure."
With that my smile vanashed and I swung my arm and smacked his fragile head. It all took 2 seconds. He was unconcious on the ground with blood on his forehead. My fangs was an inch away from his neck but out of the corner of my eye, I saw a blade coming towards me. I sidestepped and faced towards my attacker and snarled.





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The Epic N3rdy MuffiN
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comment Commented on: Sat Dec 06, 2008 @ 12:01am
AWESOME!!! MUWHAHA! First to comment! ^^
Btw 4 a good story gets a good muffin! ^^ *hand chu a muffins* oh yea is *chews* Hamari a guy or girl? @.@


comment Commented on: Sat Dec 06, 2008 @ 02:23am
cool story!!!! 3nodding good job my bunny!!!! xd lol



Ichigo 15 Kurosaki
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tiffanyco
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comment Commented on: Sat Dec 06, 2008 @ 04:57pm
THATS REALLY GOOD! =DD i love love love it!
but i think you should try to add a transition about how she becomes this spy/vampire thing because it's really sudden, but otherwise the plot is getting realllyyyyyy good!!! ♥


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